I'll comment/read, if you comment/read?

I'll comment on some of your work if you could kindly drop a comment or a vote on my recent poem called The Hospital. It was a true experienced and happend to me awhile ago. Thank you and I really appreciate it.

Sure, sure, I'll do it.

k

thanks for commenting on my poem i read ur hospital poem wow blew me away.. if u could possibly read my new one i just wrote "raising my white flag(so lost) i would reallly appreciate it thanx darl mwah