Just For Fun.

I'm going to try to make this into a little game of playing off other people's words.

I want everyone to write a sentence or phrase and have the next person build off of it.. I want to see what the end product is from what everyone writes. Lol.

I'm kinda of bored and I thought this would be and interesting way to kill some time...

So here is the phrase I want to start with..

"I'm a prime example of looks can be deceiving,"

When it appears I am giving I am really receiving

And though death will not come on this cold winter night

I wonder what i would have been doing if not wondering

If I had tried to make it work those days ago

I put what's written so far into my post, just so it's all together and I wrote my next sentence after it. :D

I'm a prime example of looks can be deceiving,
When it appears I am giving I am really receiving,
And though death will not come on this cold winter night,
I wonder what I would have been doing if not wondering,
If I had tried to make it work those days ago,

"What would be the point of watching you go?"

But then, what would be the point in having you stay.

Because we will surely meet another day

On a stranger path under a different moon

Running into eachother under the twinkling night sky

With hearts that used to be so intertwined

Deep in their tracks hard to breathe

Okay, I tried putting this into stanza form, so it's 7 lines in each stanzas. Tell me what you think and here's what it looks like so far. With my next line in the quotations.

I'm a prime example of looks can be deceiving,
When it appears I am giving I am really receiving,
And though death will not come on this cold winter night,
I wonder what I would have been doing if not wondering,
If I had tried to make it work those days ago.
What would be the point of watching you go?
But then, what would be the point in having you stay.

Because we will surely meet another day,
On a stranger path under a different moon,
Running into each other under the twinkling night sky,
With hearts that used to be so intertwined,
Deep in their tracks hard to breathe,
"Trying to find comfront in the past,"

Yet such illusory comfort is not sure to last

Darling, time cannot locum your essence.

I'm a prime example of looks can be deceiving,
When it appears I am giving I am really receiving,
And though death will not come on this cold winter night,
I wonder what I would have been doing if not wondering,
If I had tried to make it work those days ago.
What would be the point of watching you go?
But then, what would be the point in having you stay.

Because we will surely meet another day,
On a stranger path under a different moon,
Running into each other under the twinkling night sky,
With hearts that used to be so intertwined,
Deep in their tracks hard to breathe,
Trying to find comfront in the past,
Yet such illusory comfort is not sure to last.

Darling, time cannot locum your essence,
"nor can it resurrect the sincerity of your touch,"