Creative Contest!!!

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    The challenge is to create a poem based off the Title : Golden Memories

    It must be submitted by April 5th 2012.

    Rules: Must be at least 10 lines long.
    Has to include the title "Golden Memories" in one of the verses. Can't be an explicit poem or have any bad language.

    1st place: 5 comments...10 ratings
    2nd place: 3 comments...5 ratings

    Please participate...I would love to see what you come up with :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    12 years ago

    Neat! Do you want our poems messaged you or posted on here? And can we submit more than one?

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    OK yes I'll try it! Also like it was mentioned before do u want us to pm you saying we have written it after we have submitted it?

  • Linzi x
    12 years ago

    It's all you fault you've made me cry,
    because know i have to live this lye,
    you have broke my life into two,
    plainly by just being you.

    You gave me hopes of something more,
    then discarded me, like trash on the floor,
    the golden memories of you and me,
    must be hid forever for no-one to see.

    You made me cheat, you made me lye,
    you lifted me up then dropped me from high,
    you broke our friendship, you broke my trust,
    For nothing more than fulfilling your lust.

    So know i lye here next to your friend,
    and i know that you friendship is all pretend,
    because the golden memories of you and me,
    must be hid forever for no-one to see.

    Linzi xx

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    Post it here when u have it :)

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    And 2 poems of yours at the most :)

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Well my title is the same also. Though it tied in also. :p

    Golden Memories

    As they lie in bed hand in hand
    They remember the good times when they could stand
    Two lovers young full of vigor and youth
    Even when she lost her first tooth
    They grew up together not too far apart
    As they got older she stole his heart
    Times flew by when they said I do
    The bond of love remained so true
    Then it hit her like paralysis
    She could no longer feel below her hips
    Not realizing this would be all
    Time after time she would fall
    His love for her never faded
    Like two doves he stayed sedated
    Golden memories tell stories of time
    Oh how his love for her shined
    He said I love you as she fell asleep
    My soul for you is your's to keep

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Golden memories

    They say time tells all
    With each leave that falls
    Beginning a new day
    Time just passes away

    Reliving times of joy and pain
    Times of sun and of rain
    I relive every moment with you
    Ready to create more memories soon

    As time passes while I hold your hand
    The hourglass drops another grain of sand
    Years will vanish like a mist in the air
    But all our golden memories will be there.

    I tried my best. Lol

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    ^^
    (I think this one should win) lol No but great job. :) I really liked it. Your use of imagery was done very well. With your first stanza: I really liked this. Time can tell so many stories it's amazing. And of course creeates new ones too.

    2nd stanza: This was great. You have sad and then happy times. Every moment is different from time to time.

    3rd and last stanza: I really liked this part. Especially incorporating the hourglass was really cool. I could really imagine that grain of sand dropping. Great job. :)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Lol, of course you'd think that. :p and I think yours should win, good thing tainted melody is the judge huh? :) I have to post this on my account when I get the chance.

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    All of the poems have been sooo great...I didn't think ahead about having to choose just one lol I love how each of the poems is a completely different interpretaion of the title...ty for writing for me :)

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    By the way I will let everyone know the winner on the 6th and i will post it here :)

  • L
    12 years ago

    Here is mine

    The Golden memories

    Like water to a fountain
    are the golden memories
    that spring out of nowhere
    during a hot and tantalizing
    summer day
    to bring out freshness to our souls
    as the droplets of water
    that were scatteringly
    drenched in our body
    slowly evaporate
    with the temperature
    of our summer's time
    along with our golden
    memories of our previous days
    to soon come back like
    the water to the fountain
    to spring out coolness
    whenever the water
    touches our face.

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    So the winner is ICE CRYSTALS!!!!!and the runner up WHITE ORCHID!!!! Everyone did a fantastic job, but you 2 had poems that I felt best fit the Title...Thanks everyone for posting your creative poems :)

  • L
    12 years ago

    Congrats to the winners :)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Yay! :) I felt ice crystals shoud have one too. That poem was really good. Although all of them were good, I loved seeing everyones take on that title. And thank you everlasting! :)

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Oh cool thanks. :) Well everyone is a winner in my book anyways. :p I love contests like these cause they bring out a more creative side of the person. So great job everyone. :)

  • Paul Gondwe
    12 years ago

    I guess am late..if there is another one, be sure to let me know