Free comments

Anybody who wants a free comment/critique on their poem, give the name and/or link to the poem here and I'll get around to it when I can.

Http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=1227930

Ill return the favor as soon as i can

A Waltz Amongst the stars

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1228077

This one if you don't mind

Or this one:

That's how I feel - Dry

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1230081

Whichever one is easier to comment. Thanks in Advance.

Needed comment on this new poem by me! Actually, I have written few new ones after a long time!

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230319

Thanks :)

Will return the favor!

I am on my phone and it won't let me c&p the link... but my two newest are called Brainstorm and La Douleur Exquise ... pick whichever you can connect with or both, I will return the favor! Thanks in advance! :)

Done Everlasting's and Adreamer's, I'll get to Amreen's adn Hannah's in the next day or two. Anybody else who wants a comment feel free to sign up when the offer is still on and I'm still feeling generous ha

Are you in a critical mood, Colm? I need someone to take a hard look at both Mother/Mute and Pitted (mostly Mother/Mute, pretty sure Pitted is a lost cause.)
Here are links:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230371

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1230066

You're a champ.
Do you have anything you want looked over yourself?

Hey, Colmy! :) I'd love it if you'd look at my two newest ones for me. As you might know, they're the first pieces I've written in about three years, so I'd appreciate any feedback I can get.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230457

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1230456

Thanks in advance :))

That is very noble of you Colm
now, I have only 240 poems could you do them all?? I know you could I trust you!!

Just have Real Meaning's to do. Although the 240 offer sounds tempting, I think I'll leave it at just one for now!

Anybody else wants a comment/critique, feel free to post here. It might take me a few days but I'll get round to it eventually, the offer is still open :)

I would love some of mine,

though, that is at your digression because I barely write anymore and im never on the site.
I do check it often but i do not participate in the activities so i understand if you choose not to and put other peoples in front of mine.

Go ahead and do mine last if you have free time, dont know how a mod would have free time but xD; and if someone else wants theirs done do theirs.

I only ask because i dont get any comments anymore since im no longer active and i did enjoy reading how i failed epicly on poems or my shotty grammar.

So yeah.
If you do thank you.
If you dont Thank you anyways for all your hard work :3

Pick any that tickles your fancy.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1230581

I need a comment for my last poem.
thank u..

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1231523

That would be awesome.

Also

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1231315

Maybe

and possibly

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1231535

that would be cool.

Check and Balance, Love neverending. Or the two others I have written so far please feel free to pick whatever speaks to you. I appreciate would appreciate your time and comments. Thank you

Mother's pain and or Nine

Well i only posted 1 Poem
Captivity

and please if you could check out my poem on youtube
i made a video for it,
and if you like it, please subscribe for up coming videos

The link is located in the page of my poem !

Thanks

If you could read / comment on my poem too late ... thanks in advance:)

Um yes, I will take one comment on each of my poems. Please no less than 3 paragraphs per comment.

Eek. Havent checked back here in a while. Catching up to do.

Haha Jane, would you like me to start chronologically, by rating or alphabetically? Max 7 paragraphs ok? :P

If you're still doing this Colm, would love your input on

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1234692

if not, ignore me :P

Yes I agree if this is still going on, I was hoping you would comment on a piece of a friends.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1202127

if not no worries and thanks for having this thread at all.

Honestly any poem of mine that may intrigue you by the title. I would love to hear some constructive criticism.