Offering honest comments...

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    If you'd give me THE TITLE of a few poems that you want read and critiqued with my HONEST opinions, I'll happily do that... But please do not get offended with my comments.

    You don't have to, but I'll certainly appreciate it if you do the same for me.

    But, no title, no read.

    UPDATE: please put requests for only UP TO THREE poems. Sorry, but NO TEENAGE ANGST.

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    I've commented on all of them.

  • Vicious Tragedy â„¢
    20 years ago

    please comment on mine... I need some opinions

  • Vicious Tragedy â„¢
    20 years ago

    you can pick whichever ones u want to comment on... it doesn't matter to me

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    Emphasis - no title, no read.

  • Vicious Tragedy â„¢
    20 years ago

    I'm free, Temporary pain, and a single tear

  • Vicious Tragedy â„¢
    20 years ago

    better?

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    sorry, but that's what I was stressing in the first post.

  • Vicious Tragedy â„¢
    20 years ago

    Sorry

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    it's okay, no problem.

    I commented on all of the poems you requested, and also, "A Shattered Love".

    I'll be going to bed about now.. leave any requests for tomorrow.

  • Dorotea©
    20 years ago

    check out my "Lady Isadora the Fair" "My Shattered Pieces"......and if you want to check out some other ones too. thanx a lot
    SatuzKa

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Please check out my poem "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" it would mean a lot...

    thanx

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    Okay, back from sleep/school... I'll get to each of you one by one.

  • lifes big mistake
    20 years ago

    x today x
    Tomorrows to late!
    Cant hold on anymore :'(
    Im sorry :(
    X sorry x (i have to let u go) x

    if you get a chance thanks lilkit

    will returnt he favour

  • xxangelchicxx2000
    20 years ago

    would you please read

    glommy
    rose
    inner darkness
    i'll get through this and basicALLY all of my featured poems and i'll do same for you.!~~!~
    hanks~!!~
    i really means alot to me.

    xoxoxox
    nida

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    I've finished commenting on Satuzka's

    I'll be working my way down the list.

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    Could you please read "When that Day Comes" and "The Cure"? Thanks so much!

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    correction - I'll comment on both Nida's and Leah20 after dinner.

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    Nida.. I only had enough time to comment on four of your featured poems... sorry...

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    Leah20.. I only commented on "When that Day Comes" because I've already commented on "The Cure" a while back!! ^.^

    well.. I've finished with everyone now.

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    i'll get to you tomorrow.. :)

  • Shana
    20 years ago

    Here is a new one that needs some of your honesty!
    It is "My Fantasy"

    Go for it!
    lol thanx so much...

    - Shana

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    20 years ago

    Again and Again

    Take It All Away

    My Secret

    or any other of my featured poems..
    Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    I'm done, and have made an update... please check with that before putting up any more requests.

  • Chris Engle
    20 years ago

    I would appreciate it if you could comment (and/or vote) on "forever and always", dont miss your chance, and "your final decision".

    ARTF - I Always Return The Favor

    ~chris

  • Amilo
    20 years ago

    I've finished commenting.

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    heya could u read 'lost love' ,the butterfly' ,'catharsis' and 'truth hurts'??