Time Bomb Contest!!!

Ok...as the title suggests..you're on a timer...a 24 hours timer to be exact! so...write me a poem with 5 lines (no more) and...if you include the word "wicked" you will automatically gain 5 point...what are you waiting for??? GO! tick..tick..

Wishfully wanton was this wicked woman,
Who wantonly wanted to be wicked!
Women who wish to be so wonton
Are wicked women anyway!
Be wise and unsurprised by such wickedness!

I wish to be a burden
for your shoulders, selfishly corrupting
your time in the most wicked
of ways, nuzzling into your heart
to take all that you'll give me.

Path Perilous (Tanka)

We walk on hidden
trails known only to lovers
kept private; now death
abandons its false pretense
claws her down, oh, wicked day!

Left Turn Only:

Fate so cruel in her wicked ways
what makes her so important
in the grand scheme of things anyway?

Threads unraveling, paths unclear,
what I did I don't know, but this is real.

Great entries so far! Keep them coming...tick tock...

Excalibur

Willows lament into a smog smothered lake.
The trauma of knights can be heard
beneath its murky viscous surface...
hear them bleed their wicked, razor screams
as they lose their worst fear: Pride.

Wow...another great entry! The clock's ticking people :)

Just checking the p&q clock...I think there's around 4 hours left...tick tock tick...

Passionate Poetess

She looks like a nun in habit clothed
far from the mortal sins often loathed
in this wicked world widely traveled
she stays pure as it is unraveled
suffering pilgrimages untold

Is Mikey Mike the dark horse of this contest or...is there another bomb out there just waiting to explode onto this thread????

TICK TOCK

The voiceless Orphan

In her wicked smile
he grasped the the meaning of
"Orphanhood"
Perhaps swallowing the truth
paralyzed his tongue. ..

^^^

Is that a bomb disguised as a light bulb or what??? just over 3 hours left folks...

TICK TOCK TICK

Getting close to the final hour folks...members who have already posted...I will give you a final opportunity to make a second entry...

TICK TOCK TICK TOCK....

The bomb goes off in 1 hour and 16 mins...

Less than an hour to go and...I have been really reading through the entries now. One is standing out to me right now..anyone willing to turn my head???

TICK

Ok...no mucking around...the time bomb has now gone off!!!

Thanks again to all who took part....Mickey Mike..your poem had six lines so...I had to exclude it...Ben...you almost wooed me with your alliteration entry..Larry you went for a tanka and..I love formed poetry so you were close to winning. All the entries told a story that's true but...this one stood out because it also left me guessing...the title was intriguing and didn't seem to quite fit the content of the poem so...that alone held my interest so...the winner is...A Dreamer...

Left Turn Only:

Fate so cruel in her wicked ways
what makes her so important
in the grand scheme of things anyway?

Threads unraveling, paths unclear,
what I did I don't know, but this is real.

Boom!! It exploded.

Congrats maddy.

Must say, when I read Maddy's piece I thought it was excellent - a deserved winner!
Well done all and great contest again Hellon!
Ben

Nicely played, Maddy - mysterious and yet deep

Great bombing run, Hellon

Great thread Hellon,

well done everyone, especially Maddy!

Congrats maddy.

Congratulations, great exercise.

Wonderfully written poems everyone. :)