In need of volunteers

Hello everybaddy,

i am submitting a short story for a competition and I am in
desperate need of some critical eyes to give me some reviews on it before I submit it

...I have never written a story this in depth before and the journey has been long and exciting for me...

it is not allowed to be published anywhere, so I can only send it in via email...

..if any of you fellow poets has a heart and would like
to help me out I'd be forever grateful

No problem, let me know....

I'll help out if you want!

I'll help!

Yes send me ya emails guys my story is almost complete

,,,,,,,,,,,,,

and i want honest honesty pretty pls u have the rest of my life to be nice to me ok

Meeee.

Oh, me too!

Outstanding story, very passionate and heartbreaking, you seem to have a good grip on who you are and why you are that person, it's good to look at what molds us, the trials and tribulations, but we can never let it consume us to the point where we begin to feel victimized. You're a beautiful person, inside and out and that's never more evident than the fact that you wish to empower others, to heal, to share and to relate.......writing has probably saved you from yourself.....I was touched by your candid nature, however you need to expand more on some of these events, you can do that in a novel......great job, impressive....

hoped the comments and suggestions helped

Me, please.

*bumps this up for those who forgot to get back to me*

lmao

i have 10 days left

I should have time the coming few days, you could send it to me if you want :)