Do you want your poems read and commented on?

Oh, that's so great=)

could you check out the following?

The Nights of the Lost Song

Dead End

Fate of a Dreamer...

or anything else=)

thank you...name a few of your poems, and I'll read them=)

I only have three up take your pick. I need some input on how to make my writing better.
thanks.

Please read my poems:

"Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind"
"My dad: dead and gone forever"
" Silver moon sparkling"

Thanks! Let me know if you wnat me to read your poems.. hugs

hey.. i'm new and haven't gotten many comments so far, so if you could please read any of my poems (there's only 4 in total) i'd greatly appreaciate it! thanks!

Could you please read

-Alone
-Dear mom and dad
-let me say goodbye

Thank you in advance....I would appreciate it very much!!!

hey can u read my two most recent poems? one is untitled and the other is 'when the one i love is gone'. Thanx! I'll comment on your's now!
sarahxxx