reading now..post fast

i'm reading n commenting on poems for the next half hour or so..plzz poston eor two titles here and i'd really appreciate if u can read/comment on my poem 'untitled' but it's cool if u don't just post fast ppl!

Anyone of these 3 would be awesome, "She said"Tell me another lie," or "the pain" or "Heavens gate" and i'll check you poem out now, thanks.
*x*ShadowedPhoenix*x*

my featured poems please ! thanks

I like your style I have two poems published by cyber net in India A Poet's Prayer in Explorers A Colection of Contemperary Literature [I borrowed lines from the saint fransis prayer] and my poem 'Infatuaion' in the Taj Maha Review. My style is simpler than yours. YOUR POEMS SEEM MORE SOPHISTICATED. I usally write closer to Kumar's style Please comment on my lattest posted poem

Don't know if I've posted quickly enough...But I'm always looking for readers, and I don't mind honestly critiquing those who do the same for me!