Look at her

Hi, I have a six part poem so far of look at her, I would like to know what you think of each part or at least one of the parts, if you want me to read a few of your poems just ask and I'll be sure to do it!

Thanks,
Kayla Dearing.

hey kayla you might remember me as one of your cyberfriends I hope things are going well for you. Please comment on my poem Natural Choices