Critiquing for free.... Limited offer!!

Anyone who would like me to critique honestly on any one of their poems just post the title of the poem and I will do so. This is only a limited offer so post away!!

just so everyone knows i am going to be brutally honest so dont take it personally i mean, im not saying im good or anything, if i were brutally honest with myself it would get prettty ugly so im just trying to help nothing more..

Please read:

My love
Thank you

Thank you in advance =0)

a heros' funeral and its one year since
thanks xx

hey there! Please read:

Blossoming Love
Storm Maiden

if you've already read one of those u can pick another one =) thanks a bunch, keep writing,
Satuxxa

I would love it if you would read any of them! I really do want to get better, so the more help I get, the better I can be! Thanks!

All right I read all of you guys and im still critiquing until the end of the day if you guys still want to post.

May i remind everyone that this offer may only last till the end of tommorow and to only post up to 2 poems per person.
Thanks so much!!

keep on postin!
cate

hey if u cud read either i wish or no one bt myself 2 blame or happy facade wud b fab, am gnna check urs out nw superman xxx

shadow Of Justice

tell me what you think

"Go ahead"

-or-

"Temptation of the knife"

....please let me know how to improve if you get time, thanks =)....

oh and PLEASE be honest about it....

please read "I was ONLY" and i dont care if u say it sux it only tells me i have long way to be a good writer ... thank u

POPE JOHN PAUL 11

any of mine

Boarding School Thanx a lot!

alright I just finsihed everyone else, and I will be here to critique till the end of the day!!!!
post away!!

hmm, could u please read:

Land of My Past

thanks so much, i appreciate it,
Satuxxa

"eclogue 001" if you would
thanks so much

alright well i have finished commenting!
thanks guys
im out.