* Alright....IM READY TO READ YOUR POETRY! Post it!

  • Hina
    20 years ago



    Post all of your poetry here that you would like for me to read. I'll read as much as I can, and will try to give you a response within a few hours. Also, learn to take constructive criticism. This post is for people who really want to know the truth about their poetry. I'll give comments, and would appreciate the same from you.

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    wonderful! Keep writing Girl...Anything else to comment on ..throw it my way!

  • **Just Her**
    20 years ago

    Beautiful Sadness
    Beyond These Walls

    thanks sooo much:)

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    any of mine please....

  • dragonfly
    20 years ago

    This is not the end (i love you grandpa)

    Thanks

  • Maddie
    20 years ago

    Hey, if you could read any of my poems that would be great.. i'll make sure to return the favour!
    thanks alot

  • Ria
    20 years ago

    Okay,sounds pretty straightfoward.I like you:)
    I would like your opinion on "Lost count" "The lie" "My final fall" and "Carriage to nothingness"

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    could you please read/comment honestly. ~thanks~
    "For That Day"
    "Forever Bound"
    "Some Other Night"

  • Robert
    20 years ago

    ok here goes my list hope you got the time because I got the poems.

    Evil for Evil
    I stand Here
    Sin
    Medusa
    Owl
    Hold Me
    Out Of Sight

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "past" thanks!

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    any i dont really want a spicifice one

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Hmm.. Really enjoying Ria and Maddie's Poetry thus far. They're great..check em out!

    Also, thanks for the promp comments on my poetry. I was surprised to see so many happy faces :) Well, still working on Robert downward..My constructive criticism, comin' your way! Post some more if you'd like!

    ~Hina

  • Jason Meres
    20 years ago

    If you have a spare moment, check out any of mine that catch your eye. I appreciate your offer.

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Please read/comment/vote on these poems:

    "Eternal Sunshine of The Spotless Mind"
    "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever"
    "I wanted everything"

    thank you so much.. =)
    hugs and take care

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    :)

  • metuka
    20 years ago

    Lost Hope
    Perfect Guy

    Thanks :)

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Just wanted to let you all know, that im not here to be buddy buddy with anyone, instead, just to help some of you become what you want to become, Heard....

    Any comments left have gone very appreciated. Thanks and good luck in the future all of you. I try to be as honest as i can, and it'll only make you stronger. My love goes out to those who learn from their mistakes, rather then fight with ME about them :) I Thank Sane people for their patience.

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Also, Post poetry that you want commented. I don't vote unless i particularly like ALL your writing. Thanks

  • David Paul
    20 years ago

    Please read
    Thoughts of a Killer
    Tribute to my Lost Love
    and Last Testament of a Dying Soul

    I'll be sure to read yours asap. thanx.

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Alright..some of you have been asking for it..here it is, When Religion Turns Evil Part II...Check it out....and Comment

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Alright..some of you have been asking for it..here it is, When Religion Turns Evil Part II...Check it out....and Comment

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    Could you please read and honestly comment on some of my poems? Thanks!

  • Rachel E F Allen
    20 years ago

    Would be grateful for an opinion on any of my featured poems. Many thanks xx

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Almost done..and i've got some free time. GO ahead...Post Some more Young Writers.....
    ~Hina

  • Samantha
    20 years ago

    Any of my poetry needs some honest attention.

    Please & thanks, though I'm sure you've heard it all before.

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Anyone else need poetry Read?

  • Frankie
    20 years ago

    I would appreciate an honest opinion on my poems, could you tell me honestly if you like To Corbin and Eve. I'm a little more than biased, its about my children. Thanks tons!

  • Frankie
    20 years ago

    Thanks Hina. I always try to write from my true feelings, thats where I get the best ideas from.

  • erotema
    20 years ago

    anything of mine that catches your intrest
    the two newest (eclogue 001 and arcadia) are my best (in my opinion)
    thank you bunches

  • Robert
    20 years ago

    looks like you got your hands full but I will request a couple anyway
    Medusa
    I stand here
    Enjoy

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Robert...loving the way you write.."unwanted" Your writing is great... keep it up the two of you...The two of you are on my short Favorites List...:) keep writing!

    ~Keep em comin People..Let's see whats out there to be Commented~

    ~Hina

  • Exquisite_Emily
    20 years ago

    ..Can you please read my poems! Thank you so much!

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    Wow...No ONE else wants their poems read? Oh well..sucks for yall because I sure have some time on hand...:) POst Em

    ~Hina

  • Rachel E F Allen
    20 years ago

    The disease and with love. Many thanks Love Rach xx

  • Tainted Butterfly
    20 years ago

    Remember Love, The Ship if you would please. Thank you!

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    20 years ago

    Read any of my featured. Thanks a lot.

  • Frankie
    20 years ago

    Hina, could you please give my new one a read?
    To Jared, My Bestfriend

    Thanks tons,
    Frankie

  • The Angel of Secrets
    20 years ago

    Please read my poems. I'd appreciate it:)
    Thanx
    Love Line

  • Jacqui Armstrong
    20 years ago

    can u please read sum of my poetry and i would be more than happy to return the favout

    Thanx
    Jacs
    xxx

  • Courtney Lynn
    20 years ago

    Hey read
    Hush
    Why
    why did you do this to me

    Please
    Courtney Lynn