want comments?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    Please on my new poem called First Love.

    Please and thank you!
    Love always,
    Haily
    xoxoxoxoxo

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

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  • Richard
    20 years ago

    heyy can u do mine called mostly i keep it out and any others ud like thx ill do 3 or 4 of urs

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

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  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    my 2 new one's.....x-sent-x....prisoner

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    either the first to cry or a deadly betrayal dont do both and be as harsh as you can in critiquing them they need to improve as do i.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    hi again :) i got some new poems out if you want to read. can i pm u some time?? :)

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

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  • Lushed
    20 years ago

    it would be really great if you could comment on mine if you had the time
    i really dont care which one.
    and i'll do the same for you

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    they were great jen.
    anything else?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

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  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    that was very good.
    anything else?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

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  • sHaTtErEdMiStAkE
    20 years ago

    please read

    *Empty Memorandum

    Thanks a lot..

    ttyl,
    Maddy