want comments?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    hi everyone,
    If you want comments on one of your poems
    just tell me. but as I don't have much time
    I can only comment on one of yours.
    wish you all the best,
    Marjan

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    Would you please read Confessions! Thanx!

  • BrokenMisery
    20 years ago

    I would like some Constructive critism on my latest if you have the time, Thankies muchly, I'd really like any sugestons to improve my style and contents, Thank You (",)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    please comment on any poem/poems thank you in advance :)

  • Katie McCullick
    20 years ago

    pick one that interests you!

  • EJ
    20 years ago

    hey i would really like it if you read my Untitled one.. i'll repay the favor!! i need a little help on the title still so if you get any ideas i would like to know.. thanks EJ

  • Kit Kat Katie
    20 years ago

    Any if you'd like! thanks soooo much!

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    done. anymore?

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Hi!!
    Please check out my poems "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" and "My dream boy dosen't exist".. thanks a lot... I will return the favour if you want me to.. And please comment/vote.. =D
    hugs to you and thanks..!!

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    hi everyone,
    anything else?

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    sure, could you check out "Where time stands still"
    thanks

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    I've read it and I enjoyed reading it.
    thank you.

  • shakenangel
    20 years ago

    hey I would love it if you could check out:
    Questions,
    Thankyou,
    A Cry For Help,

    Please comment on them, thanks so much!
    xxxxxxxxx

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    Please read my poems:
    Love or friendship?
    Love or friendship part 2
    The lady
    Graduation (Still be here)
    -----
    Most of my poems are real good but those are the best.

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Do anyone you wish, thanx

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • Jennifer Fox or Jackson
    20 years ago

    could you comment on my newest...it is called
    Sad, Empty Soul!
    thanks-a-bunch...jen

  • LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ
    20 years ago

    could you comment on, "the story"? thanks in advance!!!

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    oh, I enjoyed reading both of them. thanks
    for asking me to read them. thanks a bunch.
    much love, Marjan

    P.S. anything else?

  • David Paul
    20 years ago

    If you don't mind could you please read One More Time. I would apreciate that. Thanx. kilman = David B.

  • Princess09
    20 years ago

    please read love of your life thx!!!!!

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    Your poems were very good.
    anything else?

  • Princess09
    20 years ago

    read ne of mine n comment i love to hear what ppl think it helps a lot thx a buches

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • abcede
    20 years ago

    me 2!! um... ITS GONE... and SAD GIRL and my newest ones!! you don't have to do all of them!! the first 2 mainly.. please and thanks!!!!!!

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    either read daddys little girl or hope. they're both really good. but if you could give your opinion that'll be gravy

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "cigarettes and a gray scarf", please.

    thanks much.

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything?

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    could u do my called Mostly I Keep It Out

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • Steve
    20 years ago

    Can you please read, comment, and rate my poem Guard of Your Heart:)?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    finished. anything else?

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    Could you please comment on my new one

    Please hear me

    Thank you so much in advance...

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    done. it was so beautiful.
    anything else?

  • Nicholas
    20 years ago

    How about my new one " truth serum"

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    anything else?

  • Marjan
    20 years ago

    wow, they were wonderful.
    anything else?

  • Nee
    20 years ago

    My Latest poems
    anyone of them
    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    tnx alot
    xoxoxoxox