Children don't deserve abuse..

  • Piper
    20 years ago

    sure why not

  • EJ
    20 years ago

    Hey your poem was good i really liked it

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    Done and it was really really good...could you please read and comment on my two new ones?? Thank you

    LOve Sabrina

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    sure, could you check out "Where time stands still"
    thanks, I'll go do yours now

  • †JustAri†
    20 years ago

    hey yor poem ROCKS!!!!!! definitely worth the read...if u don't mind couldya check out my poem how does it feel it'd mean a lot to me......luv n peace, //ari\\

  • Lecrissa
    20 years ago

    Can I say Wow......
    I Both loved and hated the poem. The feelings and immidrey are so vivid its like being right there in the room....

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    its lovely...please comment one one of mine....i love urs...

  • †JustAri†
    20 years ago

    helooooo! thanx for commenting on my poems! anything else u want commented just say so....Peace! Luv, //ari\\

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    Ive been abused
    for a long time now...
    but im okay
    THE ONLY KIND I HAVENT BEEN ABUSED WITH

    is rape...

    i was never raped,but yeah...my lil bro keeps rubbing against me .... its so sick..

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    i have a poem about abused children. its called Never again will he hurt you (comforting poem)
    you should read it...