want honest critique?

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    That's very nice of you....Please comment on:

    Please hear me
    Your lying eyes
    I don't need you anymore
    You are my pain

    Thank you so much in advance....

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  • allison
    20 years ago

    Hello!
    Thanks rating and commenting would mean alot.
    Any of mine that you'd wanna read would be great!
    Thanks agian!
    Allison

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  • EoB
    20 years ago

    great:)

    Well..

    Losing an Angel

    The Lady of the Night

    The River

    Anyone else if you care to:)

    peace

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  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    ok.. =D please read these poem.. it would meant a lot if you commented and voted...

    "I'm Not Like Other Daughters...I Cut Myself"
    "Endless Love"
    "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever"

    thanks a lot.. hugs

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  • lisa marie
    20 years ago

    any of my featured poems. thanks

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  • Wintersolstice
    20 years ago

    Could you review "My blood on his fist" and "Rain on my slanted windows" for me please. Thanx!

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  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    can u read as many of my featured as you can please? thanx :)

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  • Faceless Mirror
    20 years ago

    If you give honest comments I want you to check out mine and comment on them (have three poems).

    Thanks alot, I'll return the fav. with honesty as well.
    Faceless Mirror.

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  • *Sherrie*
    20 years ago

    Please take a look at any of my poems and I will love you forever:)
    Xox Sherrie

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  • Natalie84
    20 years ago

    That's always great! I need to read some too.... :)

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  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    plaese and thank you

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  • Lyla
    20 years ago

    any of my poems please. I love comments that have more than a "great 5/5!"

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  • ...:NiKi:...
    20 years ago

    plz read mine!!!!

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  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    Any of mine if you havent read them yet please and thank you

    Reply
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