Drunken poetry

Hi, I'm drunk, but I wrote a poem entitled thinner, I would really like it if people commented. thanks, by the way leave the name of poems you would like me to comment on, and i'll return the favor.

cool how you can write when you are drunk. Can you please read "For you my soul mate" It is my latest poem...just a bunch of words spilled from the heart really...

(thinner) was ok
but I realy liked (self pity )

Read which ever poem catches your eye.

haha drunken poetry...nice! i'll vote and comment on this poem if you read/vote/comment on Innocence Of A Baby..
~much love Andrea~

refreshing, the deal still goes, comment on any, and i'll return the favor