im new here and would like critiques/votes!

Hey i left a comment they were both reallie good keep up the good work.. u kan chek out mine and leave a comment also if u like later..

Sure I will read them now! Would you please read any of my featured poems. Thanx always appreciated!

Done and they were very good =0) please comment on my poems:

Dear Mia
Please hear me
You are my pain
I don't need you anymore...

Thank you so much in advance..