Real Reviews

I want to read other people's poetry and share my own for some real reviews. I am tired of getting, "hey good poem." I don't want that so please don't waste my time with it. If you aren't serious about giving comments don't even bother leaving me any. I want someone to tell me why they liked my writing or why they didn't. Comments such as the one I posted mean nothing...we should help improve eachother and give honest opinions not colorful rubbage.

Anyone interested?

HAHA Born I love you buddy! HAHA Of course I will. I have to leave for lunch so I'll read it when I get back. PROMISE!

Hey, Please cheak out mine!

hey, check out mine, just added 2 new ones!!!

OK! Anyone else?

Lol, she was probably to busy moaning at me.

Sry ppl, I can really hold my own in an argument.

Winter please shut up. No need for senseless comments. If you do not wish to be part of this then stay out of it. Who cares what you can do. I sure as hell don't. I see your maturity and don't care to have any part of you...leave and shut up already.

Well dont post like this specialy to p*ss me off then. Duh! What did you expect-your word choice was clearly chosen to annoy me. *Yawn*.
Besises I was being nice. Why do you have to be so nasty? I apoligised and I dont expect one in return but at least cheer up a bit. Sheesh!

Anyways I hate arguments. We are all here for the same reason after all, to write poems. I bear no ill will towards you and you are a good writer so can we put this behind us already?

Believe me this thread was not made to piss you off. I am not a little girl nor am I that childish. I made this thread for exactly what it states, REAL REVIEWS. It has nothing to do with you. I left our "argument" in the other thread. Please, don't be so damn ignorant and self centered. You are not on my mind; I am not thinking of you. Just get over it already. I made one frigin suggestion and for what ever reason you couldn't handle it, just deal with it and move on. You're 16 not 12. The 11-12 year olds on here act older than you. I have no need to please you with my cheerfulness so if you don't like my attitude then don't continue talking to me. Simple as that. Why must you drag on such a pointless discussion? Again, grow up.

Winter it was behind me but you insist on dragging it on. Leave it alone...

Im not dragging it on. C all you had to say there was "yes". But you did not. Also stop telling me to grow up. Thanks. Waiting on that "yes". THEN its over.
(Ok I admit this post sounds a bit immature but...)

Ahh actualy dont bother, cause I will only get another complaint...
I'll just imagine we called it quits. C ya, no hard feelings....x

Anyone else?

hey natalie i have two new ones

letter to mom
Ur gone

Im about to go out for lunch right now but i pormise i will read some of yours later ontonite.. i'l remeber i added ya too my fav's :-) that way i know i wont forget hehe but thanks!

Oh...I did....BEAUTIFUL!!

I commented twice on accident sorry. I didn't think i had commented yesterday when i read it.

Natalie i just got finished commenting on two of your poems.. this time i wasnt in such a rush.. I think you might find the comments more useful.. but thanks for the help i took your advice and changed the tittle from
Ur gone to You're gone
So just wanted to say thanks. :-)

Yes, ma'am. Any time. I will be looking for more of your poetry Britney...it is truly a wonderful talent you have!

Would be great if you could take a look at my newest dark poem, think its call the dark city or something like that, Thank you very much, it is very much appreciated
xx