"Drenched bouquet of flowers"

Can you take a look at my new poem (topic name)and tell me if its good or not?

sure, could you please check out

Let Me Fade Away

plz!

sure

thanx for the comment! it really means alot to me

no biggie, thanks for the one you gave me.

ur welcome...it was a really good poem...did that really happen?

*sighs* yea... 3 years ago. I thought that I could trust the guy too, but you know how it ended.

aww so it was true.... =( well I guess that's what made it so good...but amazing how you had the whole scene with them and then you come into the picture at the end.

I left a comment, which is probably a bit confusing...

*hugs* Trust is important. You deserve someone who won't betray your trust like that.

Thanks, that really means alot to me.

Welcome. *winks*

I'm loving your poetry :)

Loving yours too.
*adds to favorite list... on Her unique form of writing and talent... not because she cool and rates my poems... well maybe some of that. Also adds ashli due to she is a great writer too.*

Thank you very much.

I already filled up my favorites :( That only 20 favorites thing really needs to change!

So if you could, tell me when you post a new one. Thanks. :)

I read your comments. I found them amusing :) and I'm glad I made you smile! *dances in celebration*

I'll forgive your grammar...I understand....though right now I'm not tired - I didn't sleep at all last night...I fell asleep during the day so here I am again awaaaaake.

thanks for the comments! I'll comment on more of yours soon.

Read it people! You won't regret it. ;)

i did like it ... read my comment... keep up the wonderful work
much love to all
amanda