CAN ANYONE HELP ME?! AHHHH!

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    sorry i wasn't much help :(

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  • Synyster
    20 years ago

    Sure. I'll critique. Just return the favor for at least one of my recent poems. Deal?

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  • RaNdOmGaL
    20 years ago

    all i can say is your poems sound a bit like songs and rhymes more than like poems!!! although they are excellant that is the only thing i can really say is bad about the ones i read atleast!!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

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