is this poem too short

I totally agree. It's short, but the message is really clear. Great job, you've got a lot of talent.
-Kate

I really like it actually. Is it posted on your page?

Never mind, I found it.

wow that poem is awesome i think it is perfect how it is. I mean hey you got ur message across and you could tell ur emotion was in it great job! loved it i would give it a 5!