SICK OF THIS!!

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    I'm sick of spending about 10 minutes reading peoples poems and writing good and helpful comments and all I get is "good job, your a good writer" "5/5" "great", i'm sick of these, if yo uwant some honest feedback, and is willing to do the same for me, we can do the same 'ol deal, 1 for 1, 2 for 2, however many, anywayz i have like 8 new poems so ya, take your pick!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    2 for 2 and if you don't like my comments you don't have to comment mine deal?

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    perfect deal, and you've read my recent ones i've noticed and i do like your comments, so if you'll get some other ones, thanks in advance!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    would there be any in paticular or can i take a random choice?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Ill take random choice

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol random choice, do any you want!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Thank you very much for your comments they mean alot to me :D

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Hey same back!! yours helped and i ch anged that stanza!! thanks tunz!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Your very welcome indeed, I loved the new one engraved in my heart :D
    it was really good :D

  • Synyster
    20 years ago

    I'll get to it tomorrow, but I will rate/comment on your work. I have a few new ones. if you could do those, I'll likely do all eight of yours.

    XxX))Eclipse((XxX

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey travis im in the mood to read so ill do some more k?

    random again its fun lol

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol thanks, i'll comment on the other 2 guys once they comment on mine, and thanks lisa! i'll get some more of yours! thanks for the comments!!!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i'll do my best if you do yours! lol. hey, when i don't write anything critiquefull(is there even such a word?) it's because i found nothing wrong.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    :D

    Im to hyper now but il most likely read more when Im calm..lolololol

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i need to take a break first, i've read so many poems today my head is starting to hurt...

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    mmm, can't wait for pizza!!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey travis I cahnged the line in I tell myself lies thankx lol i always forget words or mix my and by up lol

  • crystal
    20 years ago

    i read two of your poems. if you like the comments could you check out my 2 newest ones?
    thanks
    crystal

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Feline- I wasn't sure how many ya wanted read, I read 2, and if there is more (please let me know if there is) I will do more! you're a good writer! and haha thanks a tun lisa for ALLLL of your comments, and it doesnt matter if your comments are critical, as long as they are ya know, saying its really really good, or just helpful hints, as long as its not 'good write 5/5' 'good job, your a good writer 5/5' 'good poem' i cant stand those, so ya ya get the drift! hope to see more posts in this thread soon!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    heres your sign. don't ask, i just wanted to say that

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    Sure would you please read
    My Sole Inspiration
    I would appreciate it~ Thanx!

  • Natalie84
    20 years ago

    Yes....I read a couple.... ;)

  • Darien
    20 years ago

    I totally agree with you dude. Honestly, there people out there, that are more concerned about what their rating is, rather than what their poems mean. They don't really take the time to read and appreciate other poetry. It's too bad though. If you want, you can definitely read some of mine, and I will do that same :)

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    you guess are right, actually, but i didn't start noticing the few qritiques i had over compliments.

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Alright, I've gotta ya all, and what did ya mean Feline?

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    oops. i meant to write, You guys are right. and i didn't realize i was getting poor comments until it was pointed out. i get some people that write the same thing for every poem they read. 'great poem!*5/5*' over and over...AHH!!!

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    ya very frustrating i know, so lets get some REAL comments!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hmm..Im bored This time I would like you to tell me a poem you think you need work on and il try help, something diffrent and il do the same for you.

    My poems "innocence(i dunno what to call it)"

    whats yours?

  • Absinth Eyes
    20 years ago

    Hmm... I have the same problem, forcing honesty out of people (lol). Most people just comment to get you to comment back, but that way, neither of the people get honest opinions on their work. Just "good job"s from idiots who want pity votes to get their rates up. It's refreshing to see people who actually want to know how they're doing, not just treating the site as a contest.

    Luv ya,
    ♥Niki

  • mandieD
    20 years ago

    i dont know how things are usually done here as i only joined here in the last few days and only have a few poems up....but i als try to be honest and frank in my comments...whether that be good or bad. i wil tell you wat i liked and i will also tel you wat i didnt like. isn't constructive critisism better than pithy yes ur good crap??

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol if you could check out "the pain behind these smiling eyes" from what i've heard from peeps on this its supposedly great and perfect, i just need people who are honest to see, so ya i'll get on your poem!!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Done, and im gonna kill you lol
    Do you not understand what I said? lol
    lol, meany give me a poem you knew id like :(
    how was I meant to help you with that?
    lol again

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    lol like i said i needed an honest opinion..lol i hope that was it, try "tears of the sky" lol any other ones you want me to check out?!

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    yeah eh maybe em "on that dark and frighting night"
    its needs help so give it to me :D
    Il get right on yours :D

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    lol.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Hey travis!!!
    Guess what!!!
    Your dead lol :D
    You did it AGAIN!!!
    now give me one that NEEDS HELP!
    plz :D

    xxx

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    lmao

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Im serious !!!!!!!!
    Where is he?? let me at him lol..

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i'm here. been busy today. WOW! it's 2:27pm already???!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    brb