Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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I'm sick of spending about 10 minutes reading peoples poems and writing good and helpful comments and all I get is "good job, your a good writer" "5/5" "great", i'm sick of these, if yo uwant some honest feedback, and is willing to do the same for me, we can do the same 'ol deal, 1 for 1, 2 for 2, however many, anywayz i have like 8 new poems so ya, take your pick! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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2 for 2 and if you don't like my comments you don't have to comment mine deal? |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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perfect deal, and you've read my recent ones i've noticed and i do like your comments, so if you'll get some other ones, thanks in advance! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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would there be any in paticular or can i take a random choice? |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Ill take random choice |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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lol random choice, do any you want!! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Thank you very much for your comments they mean alot to me :D |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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Hey same back!! yours helped and i ch anged that stanza!! thanks tunz!! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Your very welcome indeed, I loved the new one engraved in my heart :D |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Hey travis im in the mood to read so ill do some more k? |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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lol thanks, i'll comment on the other 2 guys once they comment on mine, and thanks lisa! i'll get some more of yours! thanks for the comments!!! |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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i'll do my best if you do yours! lol. hey, when i don't write anything critiquefull(is there even such a word?) it's because i found nothing wrong. |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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:D |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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i need to take a break first, i've read so many poems today my head is starting to hurt... |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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mmm, can't wait for pizza!!! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Hey travis I cahnged the line in I tell myself lies thankx lol i always forget words or mix my and by up lol |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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Feline- I wasn't sure how many ya wanted read, I read 2, and if there is more (please let me know if there is) I will do more! you're a good writer! and haha thanks a tun lisa for ALLLL of your comments, and it doesnt matter if your comments are critical, as long as they are ya know, saying its really really good, or just helpful hints, as long as its not 'good write 5/5' 'good job, your a good writer 5/5' 'good poem' i cant stand those, so ya ya get the drift! hope to see more posts in this thread soon! |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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heres your sign. don't ask, i just wanted to say that |
Darien
20 years ago
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I totally agree with you dude. Honestly, there people out there, that are more concerned about what their rating is, rather than what their poems mean. They don't really take the time to read and appreciate other poetry. It's too bad though. If you want, you can definitely read some of mine, and I will do that same :) |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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you guess are right, actually, but i didn't start noticing the few qritiques i had over compliments. |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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Alright, I've gotta ya all, and what did ya mean Feline? |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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oops. i meant to write, You guys are right. and i didn't realize i was getting poor comments until it was pointed out. i get some people that write the same thing for every poem they read. 'great poem!*5/5*' over and over...AHH!!! |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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ya very frustrating i know, so lets get some REAL comments! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Hmm..Im bored This time I would like you to tell me a poem you think you need work on and il try help, something diffrent and il do the same for you. |
Absinth Eyes
20 years ago
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Hmm... I have the same problem, forcing honesty out of people (lol). Most people just comment to get you to comment back, but that way, neither of the people get honest opinions on their work. Just "good job"s from idiots who want pity votes to get their rates up. It's refreshing to see people who actually want to know how they're doing, not just treating the site as a contest. |
mandieD
20 years ago
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i dont know how things are usually done here as i only joined here in the last few days and only have a few poems up....but i als try to be honest and frank in my comments...whether that be good or bad. i wil tell you wat i liked and i will also tel you wat i didnt like. isn't constructive critisism better than pithy yes ur good crap?? |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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lol if you could check out "the pain behind these smiling eyes" from what i've heard from peeps on this its supposedly great and perfect, i just need people who are honest to see, so ya i'll get on your poem!! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Done, and im gonna kill you lol |
Poetic Tragedy08
20 years ago
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lol like i said i needed an honest opinion..lol i hope that was it, try "tears of the sky" lol any other ones you want me to check out?! |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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yeah eh maybe em "on that dark and frighting night" |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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lol. |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Hey travis!!! |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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lmao |
ASPHYXIATED
20 years ago
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Im serious !!!!!!!! |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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i'm here. been busy today. WOW! it's 2:27pm already???! |
Feline Fatigue
20 years ago
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brb |