Stupid Immature Kids.....Thats What This Site Is...

nothing but little fucking kids that do not know how to write...I swear, I am so close to leaving this dam site...I get no comments worth reading...and a whole bunch of poems worth shit.

SOMEONE leave a comments that has ANY sort of intelligence behind it, or someone write a poem worth reading, PLEASE!

With the attitude you got you make noone want to read your poem u have to be nice to the people then get what you want

not everyone is a great wiriter. Get over it! Im sure you didnt just wake up one day and could write perfectly so shut your mouth. People like you dont belong on this site for your negative rude pointless comments. If you dont like it hear leave. Do the people on this site a favour

less rude,more honest I like to think...people NEED to realize a critique is not "good poem,please r/r/c my newest one!!!"

thats bullshit....

Since i am one of those little f-ing kids i believe i have an opinion, and i don't like your point of view, i have never left someone a comment saying that not everyonje dose, if we don't write so well then help us out give us advice don't all yell at us for trying. how would u fell if somone did that to you? I would never tell a writer that i didn't even know i hated their work because of their age. I don't know you and i haven't read your poems so i don't know if you can write, but i didn't call you an immature adult or anything like that you need to back off and stop takling things out on people you don't know.

monks...shut up.....you think I am bitching? well, I like to think of it as letting people know they suck... I might be a bit rude, but sometimes thats what people need.go look at my poem "Red And White" look at the last comment by that fucker "Chad"...tell me that aint some bullshit.

~ShIkY~...LOVE YA ATA---thank you.boasting is not my thing,but from other people,I love compliments.

~ShIkY~...LOVE YA ATA ( F C D ) at 2005-08-20

Wow...great poem,
i liked it how you said you finger was like your soul, and how you biting it off...
and the blood on the ground represents that you need more...
great poem
alot of originality put into it, i liked it alot
your a great writer keep it up
i love your stuff

V.S.

Chad ( C D ) at 2005-08-20

Awesome...

[ Complain ] [ Praise ]

you tell me.this is the comment that dude chad left me....what a comment huh...little bastard.

ack..please do not use words like omg,that ticks me off....either type "oh my God" or do not type anything at all please.

ok steve... thats disgusting. dont bitch about not getting a good comment. who cares if this site is just filled with little kids. theyre starting out. give them a fucking chance. at least people are reading your poems. and if you dont like it.. leave. its not like you have to keep your poems on this site. you know how to take your poems off. if you think your poems are worth comments, go get them published, then you can bitch about not getting a good comment.

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HA......kiss my ass all of you.

I love it when I make things out of controll...

(and people still think my poems are good....life if lame)

I agree that people shouldnt just write 'wow your poem was good' but thats not the way to say it! I think that everyone is hurt when someone tries to 'improve' your poem because poems are individual and written to express your feelings. People should comment in a constructive way.

PEOPLE PEOPLE PEOPLE.....

sometimes people do not listen to comments that are to nice...

say,in a critique, someone types the word 'maybe'...well, being an indecisive word, the person might think "well,I do not have to change this or that"..so they do not.and their poem goes unchanged with an error or two...

well,in this case, people like me, put "you need to change this part because it brings the value of the poem down"..something more harsh-which gets the writers attention...I do not look for sugar-coated honesty,and neither should ANY one else on this site...

blunt honesty or sugar-coated lies...

YOU chose.

You have a point there steve....ive gotten comments like that too...some too vague and broad like...great poem...bla bla crap like that...but understand your not the only person here in this site...not all people need to get such straight forward comments...and think about it...these are comments...opinions of others...thats why people here, when they comment they dont show how sucky the poem is to them because maybe to others its not...

Dude, calm your butt down, if you dont want to be here then dont be here, its not like we are forcing you to sit down, read our stuff and then leave...we're not forcing you into this, i fyou dont like it...leave...

just because people always dont write something worth your liking dose not mean they did not work hard on it and i take that as a hit becaue i dont believe i am that good but i my poems mean a lot to me and tho you may not be sayinng that about mei still am hurt by it.

well,I always think that if someone leaves a comment of two words, that means that they did not take in my poem...they only looked at the words,versus reading it and developing it in thier mind.I want to know how people think when they read my poems,what feelings they have, what images they have,the poem could be horrible,but if it makes you think you are in a foreign land,then I would love to know.people often mistake all of this as me wanting more comments,awards and people to fall in love with my poems..not true.I could honestly care less about those dam rewards.some people with all gold, can write like shit.and some people who have one pink little letter thing can be brilliant.the awards mean nothing to me.

what I look for is people who THINK.not people who type good poem- which sometimes does not even prove they read a poem.

and for all of those people telling me to leave..maybe I should...but what keeps me here is the far-to-few people who leave intelligent comments.

*AHEM* i understand your plight, my friend, but fine and simple, the way you are expressing yourself now is completely unnessissary. i know your possition in the matter, but what is bothering me is when you say, " Somebody write some poems worth reading" that is very simple and narrow minded. only one who has no idea of the true makings of a poem would say that. A poem is a form of expressing ones true feelings and an art, and if one would recall, there are different forms of art in a single segment of its structure. i will read your poems, but please respect the difference in creativity that differnt people have. weather you read mine or not, i don't care. and by the way, sometimes people can't FIND anything wrong with your work and that would be WHY they would write comments like that. So if you really think your THAT good then, take it as a complament and CHILL OUT. wow. the time i spend on things like this.

Eclipse and I will rate and comment your poems. Sorry you feel that way, Steve. Ultimately, it is your choie to stay or go, but I'd hate to see such a good writer leave over a few useless comments. Everyone gets them. Take them in stride and be happy they reated and commented at all. One bad comment is better than none at all, right?

YAY! Garett is back!!!

Come talk to me in the Friendship forum, FF.

sure!! (FF???)

ACK...

feline,we all should agree that poems abut cutting and self destruction,depression and prety much anything that would fall under the category "teenage angst" is not worth reading!...we have ALL heard it and probably written it before, it is too cliche and they all tend to be horrible....I concider good poetry something out of the normal,something challenged or a poem that takes chances, something that stands out, something that is so abnormal,it is wonderful.I can read a million poems about cutting wrists because someone got dumped,but I am sure none of them are at all different....

this site has too many 'poets' that fall into that theme.

I came here because I thought that this site had serious poets,not little KIDS looking for awards because they can rhyme.I was not expecting poets in the forums saying "read my new poem, IT IS GREAT" and then it sucks-ass.....

get real people,poetry is not a contest to see who is better,but it would help if the poets who are less serious about writing,and only use it as a means of letting steam go were illiminated dont you think?

no, unfortunitly we don't see eye to eye. i do agree that there are a lot of very similer poems about cutting and ones different dimensions of angst. but truth be told, and i repeat, poetry is an art of letting emotions go. to eniolate so many people from this site could be a LIFE LINK to them, a way to find other people who have gone through the pain and emotion that they have been enduring. i can't say that i have ever tried to comit suicide or purposly hurt myself, but i have a level of understanding that gives me a different veiw of things, and i say that because i have very powerful emotions and am beginning to understand-never mind. um, anyway, *I* write to let steam go, and to express my level of creativity, as i am sure you do. i don't care about awards, i just want to let people see my poems and improve my skills. Also, think about this for a while and make a connection.
"beauty is in the eye of the beholder"
think about that and when you say

'I was not expecting poets in the forums saying "read my new poem, IT IS GREAT" and then it sucks-a**.....'

i don't mean to put you down, but try to litten up and take in a opinion from all sides.

opinions?...

not at all.

people claim that their OWN poems are great? that should NEVER happen.EVER!...

the same as we are our own worst critic,we can be our own best friend....people who boast their own peoms,usually fail to see any flaws in them,and figure them to be perfect.this is a fatal mistake in al lot of the poems on this site..

and I am sick of "plz rate my poem,it means a lot to me!" in the title or anywhere near poems.....this site is very lame with the exception of the few good poets with actual style.

you make a strong point, and i understand, but that doesn't mean you can dissrespect people. lay it on lightly. and, please, no more f words, i find them very vulger and low. it also shows a slightly crude status within you. i read some of your poems, and i see you are an adept writer, and with that tittle comes a responsibility to respect the other forms of writing expressed on this site. take it as an adult. not a child.

i'm 13 and im a little effing kid too! COULD YOU PLEEEEEEEEEASE RATE SOME OF MY NEW POEMS!!!

lolz im just joking

but c'mon dnt be THT harsh on us lol. obviously we're not the best since we didnt write as long as older ppl did so we dnt have as much experience. so of course our poems may not be worth the read to you. but if you haven't noticed yet. This site is for people of all ages. That means if you wanna read poems only older more mature ppl write then go either find a site tht only allows amazing writers or make one up on your own. dnt be such an asshole seriously. we're all learning. and not everyone is the best writer.

like i know im not a GREAT writer but thts where I'm trying to get. And that's why I still consider myself a poet because i'm in working progress. so dnt be so harsh.

ok i tried to write that as nicely as i could but u still make me think ur an asshole that bitches too much and needs to chill out. =)

oh come on,you people are taking this too lightly.......I am not saying that people who express their feelings are wrong,they just need to stop saying that because their story about cutting is unique, it is good....I do not find myself to be rude, just blunt with my expressoins.

that is true...look i would argue this farther but...I am not stable enough...i have just gone through another little piece of trama to add to my collection of greif, and another poem has sprouted from the feeling of depth...i need to be alone...i wish i could stop crying and keep talking, but...omg, i have to go...it's getting so damn worse, i can't stand this house, damnit,

but honestly not all poems are about cutting and self-harm and suicidal attempts. And if you really don't like those poems then just don't read them.

I mean not to be hypocritical because in the past I have written poems in that category but I do agree that those poems get annoying so I just stopped reading poetry that's about self-harm. But it has a lot to do with perspective. Like sadly to admit I have thought at one point life wasn't worth it which was when I wrote those poems...but I saw the better and I stopped writing//reading them.

So.. just stop reading them.

well,sorry to be inconciderate, Feline,but maybe you should write a poem...post it here,all the kids will love it.....you might win a gold medal.

*sarcasm*

how the fuck can I stop reading them when the times I DO try to read poem,I search and all I find is a million poems about depression,and one good poem amongst the rest...

they should split this site into age groups....to help seperate the writing styles of the older and younger people.

shut your-never mind. damn it, it's not even you, so go blow your horn somewhere else! i don't need your damn sarcasm and inpudence disgracing the neutral integrety i try so hard to keep, so leave me be!!!!! i WAS going to try and talk to some friends, but i think i changed my mind. thank you so very much. i will just go try and seperate myself from my hellful mother and step father in this damn house while you bask in your sunlit room of your personal ego!!!!!!!!!!!

"Tes mon i'loch nok'e credmon'cht!"

ok yea i see ur point and i agree it would make things a little easier. but just avoid the sadness and depression section of this site and that should help you avoid the depressing stuff.

no one's poem is the same, just because there poesm about cutting dose not mean it not any good i to be honest with you cutting poems are the deepes ones ive seen. and it seems like your saying there feelings are not good enough. thats just me i mean i understand our point but soem people are sad. they cant help how they feel and i think wrtie about it helps people and no one said you had to read there poems anyway. i mean if you really feel this strongly about it why are you still on the site i mean you said you were ready to leave. no one told youy to read the poems about the cutting and but at least respect them. putting what they write about down is showing a lck of respect. thats just me and ways i am out i am dont talking about this

oh and for the seperation of age groupd they do that within members. like if u click the link that says "members" in the side thing there's a bunch of links with stuff that says:

: community

* members
o - less that 16 years
o - 16 - 20 years
o - 21 - 25 years
o - 26 - 35 years
o - more than 35 years

so just pick whichever age group you want to read from. and enjoy hope you find better stuff.

hmmm...I shall be back.....

Feline,could you please translate that for me? you seem angered...

OK yes the same subject in a poem is annoying, and also yes it is probably annoying to get comments lIke great read mine, but NO not everyone on this site is "A stupid immature Kid" kids on this site come to improve. not to be criticized by you, mabey if you would get off your high horse and help them, mabey give them advice on how to improve, or even that their poem was unorigional but don't label people because we our younger that you and some poeple arn't as mature as others, you say that all of us our "stupid immature kids", but do you really know all of us, you don't know me so how do you know that i am a stupid immature kid. Next time don't generalize, if your pissed at someone tell them not everyone, and don't bring other people into it who were innocent.