rates and comments for whoever wants them...IS BACK!!!! ^___^

  • Ashli
    20 years ago

    lol yes its back...AND ITS BETTER THAN BEFORE!!!!!
    actually, i'm just kidding, it couldn't get any better...so here's the deal, you leave a list of poems you want me to read and comment on and i'll do it FOR NOTHING! how cool is that? i came up with that all by myself...and they said i was a bad salesperson...wait...wtf...i'm not selling anything...DAMN YOU WHITE COATS!
    j/k guys...just leave me a list and i'll get to them as soon as i can
    luvs you all,
    Ashli
    p.s. yes i know i'm not funny...but please...dont rub it in my face...thank you ^____^

  • crystal
    20 years ago

    a reason to smile
    your eyes
    a single rose of red
    my destiny
    thanks
    crystal

  • Atomic
    20 years ago

    "I Still Love You"

    "Blue Ink"

    "Emotional Pain."

    "Lonely Mind."

    Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • crystal
    20 years ago

    could you maybe read "over you" as well?
    thanks
    crystal

  • LadyPearl
    20 years ago

    Empty Soul
    Untouched love

  • Jamie
    20 years ago

    wow for nothen huh thats no fair ill do a few of yours though if could you could do "Burn this Girl" and "Casket of my Desperation"

  • Drew Gold
    20 years ago

    any ideas/crits on any of my featured ones,.. id really like an interpretation of "webs of repose" if u could,.. other than that it's up to you.. read more if you enjoy them.. ill takea look at yours.. pZ

  • Rusted x Heart
    20 years ago

    I'd love it if you could maybe read:

    "Xiomara"
    "Suicide Moon"
    "City Lights"

    out of my poems and tell me what you think? it'd be much appreciated.

  • nikki
    20 years ago

    ok how about 4 or 5 of mine but especially my featured poem thnx alot

  • Anthony
    20 years ago

    Hi! If you could read and comment on my poems,
    "Who?"
    &
    "Show Me"
    I would appreciate it! ^_^ thanks so much!

    ~ANthony

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    please read:

    searching in the abyss
    i promise to change for you
    confusion
    the one who broke the angel
    cant you all see? :'(

    thats all thx!!

    ~your fool~...

  • XxTeArSxX17
    20 years ago

    hey could you read...

    have you ever tought
    strong
    i love you but
    slowest form of suicide

    and any other you like to

  • Falling Up
    20 years ago

    Hey.... well i really love getting critiqued on my poetry.. so here is a few of my favorites for you... there is quite a few.. so i hope you are very bored lol....

    Reckless Emotion
    True colors
    Silence
    Because of you
    Falling for you
    If you only knew

    thankyou so much.. feel free to say whatever you like!!! - Falling

  • Nicholle
    20 years ago

    Burning my Desires

    thank you so much =)

  • Jonathan
    20 years ago

    "too late" r/c on that one please

  • Megann Lee
    20 years ago

    "When I"
    "I'm just a girl, with a story to tell"
    "Remeber"

    Please and thank you. ^__^

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    You have been absolutely flooded with requests, so I'll only ask for one: "Toll Past Heaven's Gate."

    Thank you,
    beth

  • HansRik
    20 years ago

    Lachrymae Rerum, Ode to Autumn, The immensity of emptiness.

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    lol that's very nice of you, please comment on:

    Pray for my sister please
    To my dear brother
    Still loves him
    Depression

    Thank you so much in advance

  • Ria
    20 years ago

    The thing is, I never remember where I have posted:P

    So please read

    CArriage to nothingness
    I don't belong
    Lost count
    Meet me in the final train

    Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

  • Wip lost the Rhythm
    20 years ago

    could you comment on

    feelings
    Lit Mag
    and any others that you like

    i will return the favor

    constructive critisism would be appreciated

  • Jonathan
    20 years ago

    "all is well that ends well" please r/c

  • BeeJay
    20 years ago

    Ashli, you're hilarious. I am not sure which poems of mine you've read, but I would like you to read:
    "Why Don't You Have a Heart?"
    "Confused Heart"
    and...
    "The Fourth Month of My Life"

    Please and thank you in advance. Love ya, hun!
    ~BJ~

  • ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆
    20 years ago

    charmbracelet please !!!!!!!!
    xxx cici xxx

  • Katrina Boblina
    20 years ago

    My Life, Cursed, Innocent Angel and any others that catch your eye :) thanks!

  • Kirsty
    20 years ago

    well any of mine will do have a look and see watch catches your eye...but rate and comment pleaseeeeee
    fankoo very much everyone you rock
    love kirsty xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    of corse i will return te favour my dearest hehe xx

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    yea if you will check out any of my featured poems it would be greatly appreciated

  • Dark Kitten
    20 years ago

    White coats? lol That is funny. But anyway if you could please read these I would appreciate it:

    Child
    Email Blues
    The Best Game Ever
    The Mask I portray
    The Most Perfect Scene
    and
    Dreamland

  • x Saiya
    20 years ago

    Could you read my poems? ^_^ I only have six, I think, so any or all of them would be great. :)

    Saiya

  • Princess09
    20 years ago

    can you please read...

    "love of your life"
    "my everything"
    "my moster"
    "girls talk sh**"
    and
    "unspoken love"
    thx a bunches you can do how ever many you want!!!! ill try and retun the favor asap!!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    Bleeding Heart,Scattered On Paper
    Today at the Carnival
    When all of us were still kids
    You Are My Glowing Love
    Crying is its own poem
    Blades of Immortality

    ~thanks.

  • Lost & Delirious
    20 years ago

    Your Love Shiver
    I'll Cry Tonight
    No Words

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    please read:

    searching in the abyss
    i promise to change for you
    confusion
    the one who broke the angel
    cant you all see? :'(

    thats all thx!!

    ~your fool~...

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    and land of death

  • Lucy Loves Not
    20 years ago

    any one or two of my poems would be greatly appreciated; however, in personal preference, please do not vote. Comments, although, are encouraged =)

    Thanks much,
    Christa