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I would love it if you could read and comment on the following three poems:

"Xiomara"
"Suicide Moon"
"City Lights"

And I'll be sure to checks your poems our in turn...

James, I read that poem. It is really good. I like it a lot! It's very well written and I really love that last line!
~BJ~

Rusted, I have read yours and I really like your endings.. They are truly AMAZING and breathtaking. Wow! Good job!
~BJ~

Hey My1&Only...
I have read your poems... I was on my friend's name for two of them and I didn't realize it, so if you think that I didn't comment I did. Just know it when you see ~BJ~ Lol that's from me. Sorry about that! But you have nice poems, they are good! Awesome job and keep on writing!
~BJ~

please read:

~the one who broke the angel
~confusion?
~Answer to never be found

thx so much i'll read a couple of yours for you

Please will you read:
The first cut is the deepest
Some things you'll never know
Some days
thank you

Well, if you manage to get the time, could you please check out "The Lights Were So Bright" and
"Toll Past Heaven's Gate."

Thanks!
Oh, and you need not do more than one poem!

Good Writing!
beth

Your fool, I have finished your poems, they are sad but very good. Good job!
~BJ~

2 of my new ones please thanks so much

Fallen tears, I have finished yours now... Good job, they were good!
~BJ~

ummm Darkness
my answer
baby girl
make up your f***ing mind

Elizabeth, I have finished your poems, they are really good and I can really relate to them. good job!
~BJ~

please read the three poems i have up

thanks mate

Jenn, I have read your poems and they are good! Awesome job!
~BJ~

Okay, Jon, I have finished your poems. Good job on them, they are good!
~BJ~

Anyone else? Please just tell me what you want me to read... 3 or less please. If you want me to read more, you may repost again :)

~BJ~

Morbid Child, This is the House, and any of my new ones. Thanks:)

Please read and comment on My Cruel Angel, thanks.

love close yet far
untouched love
empty soul

Katrina, I have finished your poems... and let me just say, they scared me. Lol. Great job writing them, though! Wonderful way to make the reader feel the emotion!
~BJ~

Gabriela, I have read your poem. I like that it was short and yet it had a lot of emotion. Good job and keep up the great work!
~BJ~

lol thanks, I hoped it would be a little scary, j/k hehe

Noni, I have finished your poems and I loved them! They are wonderful! Very full of emotion! Good job! Keep up the great work!
~BJ~
P.S. I also wanna say thanks for your comment on my poem :D

You're welcome, Katrina. But they were very good poems, especially if they scare me. hehe
~BJ~

I just wrote a new poem, would you please check it out for me? =)

It's call "Universal Spell".

Thanks ahead of time.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

please r/c on the three i have up, thank you

Shadow of Memories

Thanks I alot, I return the favor as soon as i can

Atomic, I have read ur new poem! Wow! That poem is amazing! Good job and keep it up!
~BJ~

Jon, I r/r/c'd your new one, because I have already r/r/c'd the other 3. Lol, but your new one was wonderful!
~BJ~

Noni, I have read your poem. That poem is also wonderful! All of you have such great talent! Keep it up!
~BJ~

Anyone else?

~BJ~

if you could please read these I would appreciate it:

Child
Email Blues
The Best Game Ever
The Mask I portray
The Most Perfect Scene
and
Dreamland

Any three of those please

Ashley, I read "Child", "Email Blues", and "The Best Game Ever" My favorite one was Child! Well written. Good job!

~BJ~

Okay, Jamie, I read them! They are both amazing and very well-written! Good job, hun. Keep it up!

~BJ~

Hi could you read my new poem, "The difference Between Rain And Tears" please? It would mean alot to me ^_^. I wil return the favor!

~Anthony

Also, could you read "Destined", and "Who?". Thanks!!!

~Anthony

Anthony, I just got done reading "The Difference Between Rain And Tears" and that poem is sensational! good job!

~BJ~

Anthony, I've read "Destined" and "Who?" now as well, and those are also outstanding poems.... Good job and keep up the great work!

~BJ~

Thank you so much!!! I ♥ BJ!!!

~Anthony