Want comments and rates?

I like to read poetry and I always comment and rate, so if you want me to read some of yours please tell me, so that I can do so. Please only give me up to 3 at a time, so that I don't get confused as to which ones I read, you can always ask me to read more in a different post, because I would be happy to read anything you want me to read. I don't ask for anything in return, but I would very much appreciate it if you want to comment on my poems as well.
~BJ~

i did 3 of yours!! if you could please do "Casket of my Desperation" "Too Cold to Numb the Pain" and "my addiction" thanks very much!!

Unmentioned, One Day at a Time, and anyone one you pick!

Jamie, done with your poems. Great poems, truly great! Awesome job!
~BJ~

"Lovers Reject Island"

"I Still Love You"

"Emotional Pain"

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear. =)

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murder or suicide
love is where you are
each night

i'd really appreciate your comments & votes
will return favour right away
love
amy

Just got done with Katie's... wow, I can really relate, hun. You have great poems!
~BJ~

Atomic, just got done with your poems... wow!! You are an awesome poet, hun! One question I did have, though, was about your "I Still Love You" poem... It reminded me of the book called "A Child Called 'It'" by David Pelzer... is that where you got your inspiration from? Or was it a different source? Just curious. Anyway, GREAT poems!
~BJ~

Yes it was inspired by the book "A Child Called It" and by the song "Concrete Angel" by Martina Mcbride.

Thanks for the compliments, I'll keep it to heart. =)

And especially thanks for reading my poems. Believe me when I say..it was greatly appreciated.

Edited: I know I have some problems with my tenses and such, JPM is suppose to be educating me about it, but he has disappeared to no where. =(

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Amelia, I have finished your poems now. murder or suicide is my favorite out of them. It was VERY well written! Awesome job!
~BJ~

Your welcome, Atomic. :D If you want, you can ask me for help with the tenses... I know I'm not a teacher or a major in English, but I know tenses pretty well, so if JPM isn't around and I am, just ask me. I'm here :D
~BJ~

Yeah, I agree with BJ. Her "Murder ot Suicide" poem is my absolute favoutite from her collection. I especially adore the ending.

And yes, it would be greatly appreciated too. It's not a problem to have more than one teachers. =)

Send your lessons to "Tomicgrl@gmail.com"

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Will do... send your questions to brandaline2004@yahoo.com :D
~BJ~

thanks 1lovechaother ... i loved reading most of ur poems...
& i loved atomic's stuff too...
both of ya'll in my favs list..
if ya'll ever write a new poem pls let me know i'd be more than happy to vote & comment on them !
love
amy

Thanks hun. Same to you too, because I like your poems and I would love to be one of the first to comment :)
~BJ~

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=508602

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=508608

Those are my links bj:). i hope u read soon. Huggles and kisses

Okay Rik, I'm done with yours :) Great poems, filled with emotion!!! :D
~BJ~

Now... anyone else???? Come on People FREE comments!

I got a new one bj:) again. i hope im not bothering u. its called You Thought You Could Hide.
Huggels and kisses again to u

I did two of yours.

Uhm, "When I..." and "I'm just a girl, with a story to tell." Please and thank you. ^__^

Lachrymae Rerum

hey, can you check out innocent angel, my Life, Cursed and any others that catch your eye. thanks!!:)

please read and comment on any of mine .. they are not long and i could really use the input

thanks in advance

Very nice of you, please comment on:

Still loves him
to my dear brother
pray for my sister please

thank you so much

ok, Rik, I read your that poem. And No, you are DEFINITELY NOT bothering me. If that would bother me, why would I post a thread to read peoples poems? Lol
~BJ~

Meg, I read yours and the only thing that I didn't love about your poems was the format in which they were written, because they were in a paragraph form, and it was just hard for me to read, but other than that, they were VERY GREAT!!! Good job!
~BJ~

Death of Erin Mace
Gods Embrace
Fading Friendships
Let Me Be

Thanks soooo much, i'll do some of yours.

HansRik, I have finished your poem, and I just wanna say that I really liked it :D It was long, though. Lol. But every word kept my interest, so Good job, thanx for not boring me. Lol.
~BJ~

Katrina, I am done with your poems and they were great! :D
~BJ~

Bleeding Angel, I am finished with your poems and let me just say... EMOTION! Wow. Your poems are FILLED with emotion! :D Great job!
Love always,
~BJ~

Jenn, I only did one of yours... but if you want me to do a few more, please give me the titles, because I would rather have the titles and not just "any", because then it doesn't take me as long... but you are a really good poet, so if you want me to read more of your poems, I would love to :)!!! Just give me the titles :)
~BJ~

Andrea, I am finished with yours and I really like how they are short, sweet, and to the point. Great job!
~BJ~

hey... i'd LOVE if anyone could read any of my featured poems... especially my latest Broken Promises, Mended Heart... i would be happy to return the favour too!!
thanks guys!
take care, xoxoxo

the middle, I have read you Broken Promises, Mended Heart. Good job, it's really long, but it is good! keep up the great work, hun!
~BJ~

hey, I just wrote one, though it's not very good compared to some of my others, i'd apreciate some info to help improve it! it's called This Lullaby...

Fiery, I have finished your poem. It was a very different kind of lullaby then I was expecting when I opened it, though. Lol. but it was good :D
~BJ~

Nature's fire
Untouched love
Empty soul

I'd love it if you read/commented/rated any three of mine. I only have four as of now, so you can pick whichever three you want. I need help anyway.. I'm just starting.
I read/commented/rated three or four of yours. Great poems :)

Noni, I have just finished your poems. And they are great! Good job with flow and rhyme schemes!
~BJ~

Niki//Saiya, Your poems are great. I can relate a lot to them. And you write them wonderfully. Keep it up, you'll do great!
~BJ~

Thanks, I love your poems too. I'll have to leave soon but I'll read some more tomorrow. Great job to you as well!