*looking for something to read*

im looking for somthing to read...so just give me a list up to 10 and i'll read em asap...in return that you r/r/c also on my newest poem ....thats all...and i promise to give 100% honest and helpfull critiqus....as long as you do the same...no"good job keep it up"

check out Cursed, Vampire Hunter, My Life, The White Box, Innocent Angel, and Morbid Child. If you like them feel free to check out any others. I will read a couple of yours right now:)

im on it right now

either read my newest or my second to newest....i'd rather you'd read that one actually ...though you can pick

slowest form of suicid
have you ever though
my heart is breaking
strong
and i love you but ( if you have not already)

thanks off to read yours now

thnkas for the comments, morbid child is my absolute favvie too:)

alright i got you two's done now im on tears 17....

ok tears i got yours done thx for the comments

hey thanks it means a lot. and the rhymeing thing i am not to good at i am working on it. lol.. and it's kool i undserstand if you read them lol.. thanks alot

"Why don't you have a heart?"
"The fourth month of my life..."
"Love at first sight"

And if you wanna read the rest, I would love it. I only have 6. I will most certainly r/r/c your new poem too:D

~BJ~

last thoughts
Reckless Emotion
Silence
IF you only knew

Thanks please read those and comment /rate and i will do the same for your poem too!! thanks so much

you've probably read most of my poems already. Here's some new ones

Nature's Fire
Family portrait
Empty soul
petals of sorrow

I only have five poems so I'd like it if you r/r/c any or all of them. Thank you :) I love your work you're very talented, I r/r/c two of them... I'll do more later.

Okay I read your poem.. VERY good!

God Bless
Saiya

P.S. Sorry you got the flu :(

sorry guys i got flu so i'll probly read these when i wake up from a nap if i feel better but i have them all written down and i promise i'll get to them asap like i said

alright im feelin better and reading poems as we speak! lol

I just posted a new one, if you wanna check that one out too. It's called "The Girl Behind The Mirror" Thanks in advance.

~BJ~

i just got done w/ tara-kay....so now you can do mine tara...thx...and sure i'll do yours right away

read my newest
it is called
sweet remembrance

Can you read my two newest ones...

"Perfected Deception (lyrics)"

"Cigarettes and Dying Lullabies"

I'll return the favor :-) thank ya!

well any of mine will do have a look and see watch catches your eye...but rate and comment pleaseeeeee
fankoo very much everyone you rock
love kirsty xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

of corse i will return the favour my dearest
:)

ok im off to read yours' poems...please remember to readmy newest onee...thx!

Deal =0) Please comment on:

Tell me
Pray for my sister please
To my dear brother
Still loves him
Depression
No more
You are my pain

Thank you so much in advance =0)

yea if you will check out any of my featured poems it would be greatly appreciated

hi im sorta new to this site, only had my poems up for a few days, id appreciate it if you could take a peek at my comments and perhaps leave a comment? thanks bonnie x

p.s your poems are so deep, i love the way they use words and phrases that you really have to think about but are pretty much flexible enough for anybody to relate to even in a very general sense. i can believe you are as young as your profile says...i wish i had your talent at your age. the angels poems is beautiful, cant wait to read your next poem XD (ill post this on your comments too) x