Want rates and comments, come here!!!

ok.. here goes.. can u plz check out
Too Late
Part Of..
Silent Tears
Don't Play With Her Heart
Letting Go

all, or any of those and/or any others that catch ur eye..
take care and thanks in advance :D
Nannoush

Peanut Butter Is Love
God's Embrace
Love For God

Thank You!
God Bless!

a ticking time bomb. super man gone kryptonite. hell on an open lake. one more smile

hi i've done ur poem its like totally outta the world...u should write more....
pls read
murder or suicide
each night
one love
leave ur comments & votes
it would mean so much

"Universal Spell"

'Blue Ink"

"Lover's Reject Island"

"Emotional Pain"

"Lonely Mind"

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

How about these:

You I lack
Ocean Breeze
Salesmen!

thxs alot. xox

Untouched love
Staring at this ring
Winter is my time
Empty soul

hi.any one willing to comment? thankxz

Wow! honesty...thats what I am looking for...Plz read any of my poems...i have quite a few...but all need honest feed back...ANYONE PLZ HELP

Yes, that would be very nice of you.
Could you please read Nighttime Seagull and Lone Wolf's Cry.

Well, thanks a lot.

-beth

Please comment on:

Tell me
To my dear Brother
Pray for my sister please
Still loves him

Thank you so much in advance

please read - Letting go, the courage inside and you hurt me. Thanks :)

Please could you comment on 'Trying to forget you' Thank you in advance.

"Love At First Sight"
"Why Don't You Have a Heart?"
"What I cannot forgive"
"The Fourth Month Of My Life"
"Free At Last"

Please and thankyou so much in advance :D

~BJ~