Honest Critiques

Ooo yes please!! Untitled, a new one of mine, experimenting with a new style so would love an opinion thankyou xx

How About "You & Me"

"Why Don't You Have A Heart?"

Please and Thanksya muches in advance! :D

~BJ~

Do you have a censor on your computer, because the "I you.." part you are talkin about, is "I hate you..." if you can't see that word, it's h a t e. Just to take out the confusion.

~BJ~

You know what? it was my computer that did it... I had edited something on it, and one of my computers has a censor for silly things like hate, girl, etc... I just fixed it, so if you wanna go read it now it might make a little more sense :P

~BJ~

"Universal Spell"

Thanks Jessica. =)

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plsplspls you are a godess among us. "Worries That Devour Me" first on the favourites.ty.

oh yes please! please! like I have said so many times... if ur gonna give me a low score please tell me why and what I need to do to make it better and if ur gonna give me a high score... it would be nice for u to tell me why u liked it:) thanks:)

untouched love

I would be thankful if you commented on my "The Elegy of the Lovers." Thanks in advance.

The Greatest Moment Ever

Broken Promises

I would love it if you could give me some feedback on my most recent poem:

"Edge Of Sanity"

if you could please? Thanks in advance!

-*-please just read my newest-*-

Trying to forget you

my latest poem please

"A Tribute to the Nice Guys"

"Our New American Dream"

Thanks much

'Without you' and 'Love is in the air'

Thanks alot, I really need help in these! :)

I'm sorry! I misread the post. It should be only one.

'Love is in the air'

Thank you!

"Poverty"

Edited: I changed it to "For Love or Money"

This one is my newest. =)

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"Littered Time"

Thanks

Lucy Loves Not

Hey thanks so much for your comments, that's a honest and helpful one. Thanks a million!

Hi could you read "Those who make life worth it"?
Thanks!!! ^_^

~Anthony

LOVE IS WHERE YOU ARE

watching them fall.
id appreciate any and all criticism.
rate if u want to.

"Red Envelopes"

Thanks Jessica. =)

I feel bad that you have been reading my poems and I only read like two of yours, so I'll read some more now.

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I already read it anyways, can't take back the comments I have posted. =)

You are an amazing writer yourself.

There was one poem that I have read from you, I can't remember the title though, but the topic was very good. It was of perfection.

I recommend it to everyone.

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hey, if you could comment on my poem titled 'dear america' that would be greatly appreciated, feel free to criticize, just as long as you are honest. thanks:)

Sorry to bother you again, but I just wrote another poem.

"Prince of Heartaches"

Haha....once I write, I can't seem to stop. =)

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Haha...you make me smile with so many compliments!

I think because in this poem, I actually used my emotions and not just my mind. =)

Thanks M'Dear!

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