need comments!!??

Would it be okay if you could comment on three of my poems?

"Because Of"
"Eternal Fall"
"Behind The Smile"

Thank you so much! I'll return the favor!

heyy could u vote and comment mine called
Machine malfunction

plz check out my
"Silent End-"
"A Love Poem"
thanks and i'll check urs out=)

any of mine would be great!!

thanks

Ruby

Hello, could you rate / comment any of my poems, preferably Garden of Lost Hope, Forever Untill the End? But any is fine ^_^ Thanks!

hehe looks like you're gonna be busy, so I'll understand if you don't quite make it 'round to mine, but I thought since your asking for requests, i could take advantage ofyour offer. hehe I'm sure we all appreciate it sooo much more then I can explain, so thankyou in advance... I don't care which poem gets read, I just don't get alot of constructive criticsm thus I dont really know my strong and weak points very much. I really want to know what i have to work on and what i've got down, so be harsh if you could. Thanks again :)

Please (when you have time) comment on my newest "Eager Dreams" then if you still want to read more I wouldn't mind you reading "White Picket Fences," Thanks.

I'll go read yours now.

Can you please my newest Let's Pretend and I Cannot Explain.
Thanks a lot.
Tiffany.xox.

"Broken Hearts"

hey could you check out "mangled" for me?

any of mine will do.. :) ---->I'll be checking yours out too :)

"Scarred Out Of Blood"
"New Day, Continuous Nightmare"

I'll return the favour (i always do !!)

Thanks,
xxx cici xxx

-I know your always voting on my poems lol but I've got some new ones that need some voting/messaging so if you could THANX and I'll check out yours if u have any new ones-

.:yourdirtysecret:.

Any please :)