Honest Comments

A while ago I made a post for honest critique, but it's got lost somewhere, so I've started another one.

Post ONE title only.

I will give honest constructive criticism.

I prefer not to read vent poetry, but if that is all you write, please post the least "venty" poem.

If you have any poem that is particularly sensitive do not post the title here because even if it is incredibly sad, and very true, I will still be completely honest.

If I'm harsh in anyway (I won't always be, I leave many positive only comments) it's not personal, it's just because you asked for honesty and I'm trying to help.

Returning the favour is not a requirement, however, feel free to do so.

Thanks for listening (or reading)

Silver

Could you please go leave a comment on "I Loved You" it would mean alot. Thanks so much.

How about "I Dont care"
Please & Thankx

Could you please critique "To Maura DeJesus"? Thank you!

Try and Hold on

I know itsw not great, but i'd like to know what others think thanks,
xoxo
allison

"Broken Hearts"

"Meeting You"

This one, I know, still needs a bit of work, but it's soo different from my other styles that I don't know where to fix it or anything. Help? lol I was hoping to cover a range of styles while I was on this site because so far I've learned alot and I have you guys to thank for it... But I can't seem to get what I want out of this one...

perfect

Apathetic Soul, *HeHasMyHeart*, goth, libby, Allison, David J Gossett, steph, kilman – I have left hopefully sufficient comments on all titles left. I hope the feedback was received well.
Keep writing all.

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Anyone else is still welcome to post ONE title here for honest comments.

Anybody?

Could you please read 'Insanity'. Thankies!!

Any one of my poems would be nice