First poems in a loooong while...

  • Sierra Rae
    20 years ago

    Hey i haven't posted any poems in a really long time it seems and so I have four new ones up as of today. Please read any/all and vote/comment...it would mean a lot to me, i wana see if i've lost my talent :P

    titles:
    "Her Eyes"-i love this one, tell me if you do too!
    "Depression"-the best description of depression i can come up with...
    "A Caring Friend"-i think it needs something at the end but i don't know what.
    "Scissors and Steak Knives"-i was trying to make you cringe...let me know if it worked!

    Comment on one of those and i'll comment on one of yours...or 2 or 3 or 4...like an actual comment plz...not just a "good job! r/v/c one of mine!!"

  • Void
    20 years ago

    Well I commented on all 4, originally I was just going to read 1 but, well the one I read first was good and I was curious as to what more you could write... You definatley haven't lost any talent, and on a few I did leave my opinion and stuff, but feel free to ignore them. I just think that the comments are there for everyone to post what they think, whether it be bad or good comments. So I always try to give constructive criticism back... Most of the time lol. Really good job over all though!

  • Truest Lies
    20 years ago

    Sure.
    Please could you read "How Do You Want To Die?"

    thanks!