Do you need honest comments?

hey sammie, it be great if you give me an HONEST comment, on my poem(s) if you can give me an honest, be as harsh as you want, i need it, i will definately return the favor...

i am true to my word and reply to any request that i possibly can and i comment on as many poems that i have to to honestly and try to evaluate them as best as i can... if there is anyone else who would like me to take a look at their poems and leave a honest comment i'd be more than happy to so just post anything here... thanks

sammie

read and commit on my poems plz

hey guys... currently i am grounded from the computer but that wont stop me from getting on at night... so if i dont get back to you right away that is why... depest apologizes.... leave me some new ones for when i get back and i'll try to look at the ones already here asap.. thanks

sammie

dont get introuble i know what its like...when you have time would you please read some of mine? and please be harsh on them i know they need work. thank you and have a good day/night

could you read and comment on beautiful sunsets please? thank you

Sorry to hear that you're grounded! it happens to me all the time :-/ Anyway, I'd be really grateful if you could look at my latest poem:

'Silence (Act IV)'

whenever you get a chance? And if you like it I'd love it if you could read more.

Hello there!
I haven't written much though I'd appreciate your comments and feedback. Please read my poems and let me know how you think of them and receiving suggestions to improve would be a delight!
My poems are "Life", "The Sunset", "You're Wrong"
Thankyou in advance!
Yours truly,
Hareem

nice job everyone... i finished all requested.. i think haha.. no im pretty sure i got them all and if i missed one please let me know... if there are anymore post them here.. i'll be more than happy to take a look at them... again nice job

sammie

I would appreciate it if you rated and commented on my two new poems, "Is It Crazy....?" and "Knowing". Please and Thank You!! :D Take care!

hey could you comment and rate any of my recent poems? It would help me alot!!! ^_^

~Anthony

Hey can you check out my poem I just wish??? Thanks

Very many thanks for your time and nice comment, Sammie. Here is my new one, 'Fall'. Please check it out with your r/r/c.

anymore?

sammie

any of mine thank you so very much
i promise to return the favor

love always tabby

"Romeo to Juliet"

Thank you =)

Please read any on my featured list! Thank you soooo much I will return the favor!

hey plllz read some of my poems i havent been on here for a while and i want to know what u think so plz comment i will try and return the favor thanx

summer storm

please and thank you

im always looking for some opinions and suggestions!

Please read my two newest.
Thanks a lot.

Hello Sammie!
Thankyou so much for reading and commenting on my poems. How about my latest, "One Day"?
Thanks.

done with those ones... anymore?

sammie

thanx alot

"It's Finally The End..."

Please and thanksya muches in advance!

~BJ~

can you read this is not goodbye

thanx sammie!!!

shhhitsasecret.... i am sorry i cant read your poem... whenever i try to read friendship poems it logs me out so i cant comment.. your poem was very good though.. and keep it up... if theres another one that i can do for you please let me know...

To all who post their poems... my computer will not let me comment on friendship poems... i am sorry... but i can read anything else... let me know which ones you want me to read... im usually pretty good at getting to them within a day or two... so give me some good ones...

sammie

No Defying Death - evil poem

Bloodcrave - evil poem

Need - love poem

I don't care which one you read, I'd just like to have some feedback to tell me if I'm doing anything wrong in the poems or whatnot

thank you!!!

anymore?

sammie