I wanna read!!!

Ok people i wrote a message saying i wasnt doing this anymore but people didnt see that part I guess and then i realized duh change this message and write it here so yeah I cant read everyones poems right now just too busy with things. Im sorry for those people that just requested something

i would be happy if you'd read my poems "from silence" and "under the rose" they are the first two poems i've written.

thanks.

Jonathan

I have checked both out. Good job

I checked out beauty rose and murder on our love affair. I loved both keep up the good work!

I checked out dad and tears for him. I liked them very much. If that one ever goes on a card I will buy it ;)

okay pick some that you wanna read

I read "I love you" and "my fault". If there are any more you want me to read just ask.

if u could PRETTY PLEASE check out the 1st few poems I have, I would be very grateful! And of course I shall check out some of ur poems=)

Edit: Alright I wish I could comment on the poem... directly but it the site logs me out anytime I click on love poems or friendship poems (Its stupid!) Anyways... you’re poems where very nice! They had a lot of simple rhymes though, and when I say that I mean *Me, see, be, you, to, do* those r everywhere, and I'm not saying u can't never use them, I'm just saying everyone uses them, and over uses them in their poem, its like the same thing over and over again. I think when you really explore different words, you get the meaning of your poem out better, and of course the reader gets more into it, and the reader can tell how much time the writer put into the poem. Also using Periods and Commas will help bring out words in your poem. Commas will give your poem a sense of rhythm, which makes the reader enjoy reading the poem more, The periods will tell the reader when the sentence stops, so they don’t get confused lol. All in all, I really liked the emotion and feelings you put into your poems, and the meanings in them, good job=)

~Megan~

sure, you can check out my poetry, thanx

Will you read any of my poems?
I would appreciate it.
Thanks.

im always open for some comments n opinions

I promise I will read your poems tomorrow just been a messed up day.

you could read any of mine you want...i always return the favor.

Please r/r/c my newest titled "It's Finally The End..."

thanksya muches in advance :)

~BJ~

Mine, pretty please!
The sunset
Fall
and any other you like
I'd be truly glad!
Thankyou

Well I think I finally got caught up and have had a chance to read everyones. If there is anyone else out there just leave me a message and I will get to them asap

well you can read mine and i'll read yours.

Could you check out my latest? thanks

hey, could you check out any of my poems. that'd be great.

thanks

Thankyou so very much for your praise and wonderful comments. It's very encouraging.

Hey id really appreciate it if you r/r/c some of my poems!! please and thank you!!
~~Sweetie

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Perfect disguise
Pain leaves a scar
Answer this please

Thank you so much =0)

I will read any poems yall want me to but dont request any that are about suicide or cutting. They are too depressing and I just dont enjoy reading them. Sorry

please comment on
be mine
and
when tomorow comes
=)

Please check out any of my poems..And please vote/comment... I will return the favour.. hugs from me =)

Any rating / comments are appreciated on all my work... Thanks!
J. Lau

The Vampire's Kiss

Please and Thank You

if you read some of mine i will do the same for you

wishing for love

"Wishing Away My Life"

Thanks ahead of time M'Dear.

~Atomic

Yall i dont wanna read right now lol this post started a long time ago. Ummm ive been so busy lately I dont have the time to read everyones request. Sorry

ive got a new one if u dont mind :)

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I forgive the past
Make me perfect
I wish that I could tell

Thank you so much in advance =0)

r/r/c

Photograph

Please and thank you

read some of mine! how about my 4 featured ones? their some of my faves