New Contest

  • Tim Bradshaw
    18 years ago

    This contest can be on any topic! The contest will end after 20 poems have been submitted. Each poem will receive 1 comment and vote. There will be 5 places on this contest (Because the last contest I held had so many good poems).

    Rules:

    1. Has to be your poem.
    2. Only one poem per poet.

    That's the only rules I have this contest is as wide open as you can get. I hope to receive a varity of topics. Good luck to you all an enjoy the contest, I know I will.

    1st- Placed in my favs, 7 comments and votes
    2nd- Placed in my favs, 5 comments and votes
    3rd- 5 comments and votes
    4th- 3 comments and votes
    5th- 2 comments and votes

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    absorbing warmth from the flame
    the crowd gathers, shivering
    unaware of their actions

    glazed eyes dance, transfixed
    following the candle's flicker
    moths collide and fall helplessly

    bodies move breathlessly;
    drawn away from the center
    conforming to fill their shapes

    they've never acted so alive
    feeling light; one breath and
    their flame is dispelled

    smoke hangs in the air, lazily
    the isolation tastes warmer
    cuddling their darkened forms

  • Lexie
    18 years ago

    How the Past is Never Forgotten

    We always talked as friends,
    Flirted as lovers, but
    Your girlfriend didn't know
    The difference.
    Time went by, we grew apart.
    You graduated, started working.
    My next year in class was lonely,
    For I didn't have you by my side.
    We didn't play ball anymore,
    We didn't see each other at school.
    I moved so we didn't live in
    The same town, I couldn't run
    Into you while you were at work.
    Time went by, I'd forgotten
    About you. Friends and I
    Went to have a good time
    Forget about our problems.
    But when we ran into you
    It brought back so many memories.
    We sat in the front row,
    Just to sit together.
    You kept flirting with me, I
    Was thinking of old times.
    But just like the past
    You never knew how I
    Felt about you.

  • Allison
    18 years ago

    Unnoticed
    by Alyson

    Crimson tears fall from my veins
    Specked with my many pains
    As they fall my sorrows fade
    Then I thank my blade

    100 thousand drops have fallen
    From my weakening arms
    100 thousand tears have fallen
    After each self-inflicted harm

    Too many tears have fallen
    From my dark blue eyes
    I've screamed so many times
    Yet no one hears my cries

    I've been abandoned
    Alone on this hell called earth
    So many people have passed by
    Not seeing my worth

    But I will make them see
    As the tears fall to the ground
    That something good is gone
    And will never come back around

    As my body fails to move
    And my eyes fail to close
    They still don't notice the person
    That was right in front of there nose

  • Michelle
    18 years ago

    Please Hold Me Tight

    Please hold me tight,
    Don't ask questions,
    Just do what's right.

    Please hold me tight,
    I'm very scared inside,
    And, in depth of fright.

    Please hold me tight,
    When I feel like hurting myself,
    And, cannot see the light.

    Please hold me tight,
    Tell me you love me,
    And, tell me I'll be alright.

  • Dean Russell-Rands
    18 years ago

    Deathly Awakening
    by Dean Rands

    You sat in front of me, always with a smile
    I've only known you for a little while
    But you're gone, broken and smashed
    Driven from this world when the car crashed

    I didnt know you well - but I feel pain
    You're life just begun and the paper: plain
    You could have been anything, gone anywhere
    Your whole life taken: how can fate be fair?

    But still, I am scared, shaken and blue
    Because it could have been me, not you
    It could have been anyone's car that crashed
    Anyone's life broken and smashed

    A selfish thing to think - I know
    But I cant help it - I'm sorry and so
    It still doesnt change your fate
    Or revive you from that deathly state

    In your death - I have seen words so true
    Death isn't stoppable by me or you
    People die - old and young, healthy and ill
    No one can beat it, no one will

    We can only live as we should
    To the full, if only you could...
    It's unknown when anyone will die
    And so there can be no goodbye

    And I hate to say it - but it's true
    Your death awakened me - told me what to do
    Told me to live life to the full - do what I can do
    It's sad that I didnt know before the world lost you...

  • ShadowDancer
    18 years ago

    dark to me now

    No more do the stars brightly glimmer
    Happiness in my life I will no more allow
    No more do streams under moonlight glitter
    No more to me does the wide sea shimmer
    To me the sun itself is dimmer
    For all is dark to me now

    Since the day the life flew out of thee
    Only weeks after we had made our vow
    All thoughts of life deserted me
    Life itself lost all meaning to me
    The joys in this world I no longer can see
    For all is dark to me now

    Each day as I sorrowfully waken
    Wishing I was with you somehow
    For by God you have been taken
    I am left desolate, alone and forsaken
    My faith has been so surely shaken
    For all is dark to me now

    Now my body lies broken
    Forever is it dark for me now
    For my heart it has been broken
    For my soul it has been broken
    So desperate steps I have taken
    With you forever I will be now

  • ~~Lindsay Woods~~
    18 years ago

    Pain Within

    I love you, but you won't take me back,
    I did something i shouldn't have,
    I broke up with you because it was the best thing to do,
    But now i can't stop thinking about you.

    I think about the good times we had,
    And now i feel very mad,
    I should of told you this before,
    And now i love you even more.

    I remember that day i said good-bye,
    I remember how you made me cry,
    You hate me, it ain't a sin,
    And now all i can say is,
    I have pain from deep within.

  • Angie
    18 years ago

    "Take Me Away"

    Why do I cry?
    Night and day
    Won't you take my hand?
    Take me away....

    Unleash me from my pain
    Free me from my fears
    Grant me a life
    Where I shed no tears

    Just take my hand, and hold on tight
    For if you let go, I may never see the light
    Darkness dwells in the depth of my heart
    And bit by bit, tares it apart

    The sounds of sorrow, the sounds of pain
    It's all to much, I can't handle life's touch
    Why did it have to be this way?

    I'm an empty shell, broken and torn
    Covered by a mask, that covers my past
    Darkness chews, eating me inside
    Yet I tell no one
    I just run and hide

    Tears flowing freely down my once cheerful face
    My heart beating rapidly, quickening with each pace
    Eyes darting from left to right
    Searching for someone, to make things alright

    And you wonder why I cry
    And you wonder why I scream
    When I whimper away in fear
    Or try to run away from here

    Don't tell me that you did not see
    The tears upon my face
    Don't tell me that you did not care
    of why my heart would race

    So why did you ask
    Even though you knew
    About my past
    Like you had no clue

    If its answers you want
    Then answers you shall receive
    But let me warn you
    Understanding is not easy

    This is how I am....

    A girl;
    That cries
    Night and day
    Wishing for someone to take her away
    Take me away....

    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    What is Love?

    What is love?
    A figment of my imagination?
    A destiny for life?
    What is hate?
    An obstacle in life?
    An insane way of being envious?
    And for tha matter what is envy?
    Is it the opposite of compassion?
    What is compassion?

    Love.Hate.Envy.Compassion.
    Why are these feelings taking over me?
    Love.Hate.Envy.Compassion
    Are the guiding my life?
    Are the ruining my life?
    I do not know.
    For what is love??
    Does anyone one know?

    What is love?

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    A KISS OF DEATH COMES WITH TIME
    by Just-take-my-heart-i-want-you-to-have-it

    Once upon a time
    I think it once was
    How i miss that time
    It was fall of innocence and wonder

    In this time we share
    The thoughts and love grows
    How I wish you could stay
    But it is not time for me to kill

    Now time away calls
    Into my deep sleep
    My mind insecure falls
    Words never to make a peep

    In my deep dark sleep
    I dream, I dream of that
    Time with you as my keep
    And you longed for my kiss

    The kiss, as you said,
    Was a kiss of love.
    But my kiss wasn't one of love
    But one of death.

    You with your kiss
    Came to make me yours
    You took me and bound me
    Forever kept as yours

    Kiss me as I look at you
    When you reach me
    Time will stand still
    We live on together

    Together you and me
    Forever just to be
    Now let's believe
    That together we can be free

    Free just like we use to be
    Your kiss that steals my breath
    You try to see what is in me
    I hide what I really long to say

    Hiding the pain
    The kiss that I gave
    To the one I love
    But oh how the one I love is dead.

    A pain that was hid
    A kiss for whom that died
    A cage that I was placed in
    A cage forged by pain and locked with a kiss

    I sealed the cage you're in
    But only your pain can open it
    With your raging pain and anger
    The lock will open releasing you

    But my pain of iron
    Sinking deep in my skin
    Burning, Churning, Turning
    My life is close to fin

    I fear this cage of iron
    Why my love did you die
    I long to feel love again
    I want to get out of pain

    Pain, for the one I loved
    Pain, to love again
    I love too less but to love again
    One like you

    You kept me in pain
    You did not know
    A pain that will come again
    A pain that won't go

    Some where in time
    I lost you in your cage
    I had it sealed with a kiss of innocence
    Release me with your rage

    Fickle fat decides it so
    So with the wind I must go
    Away with water I do flow
    Your kiss with parting it goes

    This pain like cold fire
    I long for this hard desire
    My loving one is dead
    How can I follow this path

    The path that's set before me
    Is one so hard to follow
    I can't ever be able to see
    One so lovely as you

    I will sing sweet beauty
    For I will go
    Forever without you
    I will always miss you

    I want you to stay
    You leave me and I cry
    For if you leave my you will die
    And die you will for i will kill thee

    Your blood on my hands
    Forever shall be
    Pour it into cans
    Psycho be free

    AHHHH I run from the
    Mirror for I can't look
    There any more I try
    To fly but I just fall

    To be one like you
    All my flaws and faults
    Oh why can't I be perfect
    The mirror shows the true me

    Forever I will go
    Far away from you
    Death will come
    Far away from you

    Away from you I flee
    But inside you're with me
    Join my pain and hurt yourself
    You should die but I will instead

    Blade to wrist
    Collect my thoughts
    Slice then wait
    For all I've wrought

    I wish to die
    I want to fly
    I call to you
    So may I fall

    Into utter darkness
    I fall
    Being called and never
    To return
    GOODBYE

    *this is a group poem so do whatever with it*

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    This is not goodbye
    by Tabby

    Crying by his bedside my tears flow endlessly
    I held his hand so tightly never wanting to let go
    Trying to not think about what is about to be
    I look up at him trying to not let my sadness show

    His eyes are closed his breathing is slow and heavy
    I run my hands through his thick, dark, brown hair
    His handsome face is so pale with the color gray
    That I begin to cry even harder thinking it isn't fair

    Sickness is taking my true love away from me
    Draining away his energy happiness and light
    But not stealing our love away from each other
    That is the one thing that he was able to fight

    His eyes slowly open and he turns toward me
    He smiles a weak smile and touches my cheek
    I feel myself breakdown and burst into sobs
    trying to say don't die but I could no longer speak

    he grabs my hand and pulls me to him
    reaching for my face he brings me into a kiss
    then he hugs me with such a weak embrace
    I hug him so tight never wanting to end this

    Suddenly he lets go I pull myself slowly up
    He looks at me with such sadness in his eyes
    "I love you sweetheart"he says to me
    "I love you but there will be no goodbyes"

    "I love you to" I sob into his shoulder
    I lay on his chest hearing his heart as I cry
    I feel his breathing slowly fade away
    As i sob to myself I say "its ok this is not goodbye".....

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    dark angel

    A black laced dress
    pale white skin
    descended down from heaven
    for so many unforgotten sins

    a motionless body
    dark Blue crimson eyes
    silent screaming ceases
    No more tears will be cried

    black silky feathers
    now stained with blood
    all the angel ever wanted
    was simply to be loved

    step into her gaze
    and look upon the marks
    don't notice all the pain
    and the forever broken heart

    it's obvious that she was hurting
    with blood still running down her wrist
    you could see hundreds of scars,
    left from the razors gentle kiss

    next to her body was a note
    and near her arm layed a knife
    in the note read all the reasons
    of why she ended her life

    bruised and broken
    no one saw
    all the signs
    she left within her hidden flaws

    there were many rumors of why she left the heavens
    rumor had it she found an angel
    but he found a better pair of feathers

    but this wasn't the reason
    anyone could see
    her pain was deeper
    she just simply had to leave

    but no one knew
    behind her mask
    everyone thought she was fine
    I guess no one really asked

    now she lays there
    with rain falling down
    everything is silent
    exept for the rains empty sound

  • David Marshall
    18 years ago

    ''Do you love me?''
    By: David marshall

    I love you,
    Why can't it be just us two,
    Without you my life is threw,
    Every day my love for you grew,
    I care so much, you have no clue,
    No matter what our lives will pursue,
    We sometimes say things that are untrue.

    My love for you will never be surpassed,
    For my love for you is way too vast,
    and my love for you will always last,
    Theres been sorrow but I'll forget the past,
    Please understand, because this life is too fast.

    Do you think we could ever be?
    Only you can set me free,
    I need to know before this world I flee,
    I love you,
    But do you love me?

  • Patrick
    18 years ago

    Imagine A Thing Called Love
    by: West

    Loving is not a choice one is given, as to choose whom to love. The gift is that of love itself and the choice is to take such a chance. One moment, one chance, and a lifetime could be yours. Whether one be a man or a woman, close your eyes. Now your open to see what truths can be seen. Listen to your heart and soon the time will come. Your heart will join with another in loves song. This truth has reached your side for a reason, may you finally see. If two are in love with the other, why can't their love just be. Passion is more than the physical touch or the look of a body's curve. It's seeing into each others eyes and knowing that your found. Feeling as if your home, like your feet can't touch the ground. Crying even though your happy and laughing when your sad. This gift is that of love and my choice I have made. I'm a man who loves a man in this very way. From this day on I choose him for our passion is quit strong. If you listen close you can hear our song.

  • Timeless Hopeful
    18 years ago

    A Season's Lifetime

    Spring:

    A naïve youth
    Her name is Ruth
    Her looks were often repute
    This bordered on beautiful and cute.

    Her skin tone is milky with a hint of chocolate
    Her facial features are symmetrically accurate
    Eyes are light blue mixed in with grass green
    A look would suggest she was fifteen.

    A single awed glance makes her blush
    To a colour of rosy flush
    She is youth personified
    Inquisitively embodied.

    Summer:

    An independent woman
    Her name is Diane
    Caring mostly her financial future and her work
    Haughtily bragging with a smirk

    Her skin tone is coffee with cream
    Skin glowing with a gleam
    Men flocking to her on bended knee
    Evaluating her to Aphrodite.

    A single woman is she
    Sleeping with men freely
    A harlot is often what she is called
    Appalled,
    She thought “Why do women get to be called that”
    Sighing, “When men do it, they are applauded for that.”

    Autumn:

    Devoted mother
    Not like any other
    Protective of her kin
    Many call her Lynn.

    Frumpy and bloated she hardly cares for her looks
    Taking the money she earns to buy her kids expensive things and books
    A person asked “Why not take care of your looks”
    She said “I want my children successful, so to do that I have to buy them books.”

    A great mother is her goal
    She is on a roll
    Her first priority is her kids
    Wishing to turn her seeds into orchids.

    Winter:

    A cantankerous crone
    Her name is Joan
    Nagging and complaining about her long gone days
    Wishing for the beauty that was always praised.

    Her face is haggard, her skin tone banshee white
    Once a face that inspired poets and musician’s bright
    Liver spots engraved in her hands, to claim she is old
    Her personality once sunny, became bitter and cold.

    A woman lost
    Now the bride of frost
    The things that made her what she is
    Her best known assets perished
    Like a cola that lost its fizz.

  • Marjan
    18 years ago

    My journey
    by Marjan

    Now that I let the words out of the cage
    Let them flow freely on this page
    The sun is setting
    And it's getting dark
    Soon, up so high in the sky
    The stars will spark
    Starting my wander around the world
    Walking on this earth that is way too cold
    On my foot, I cross the land
    A little lamp in my hand
    A coat to keep me warm
    Shoes to keep away the harm
    I keep going on and on
    Sometimes walk and sometimes run
    Until a far away town I can see
    Where under a bridge, there's a family
    I feel ashamed
    At the sight of a little boy
    That his shirt is his only joy
    Taking off my coat
    I wrap it around him
    A smile is the only thing I receive
    Which is the best gift one can ever give
    I keep going
    Strong winds, freezing weather
    Go back home. That's better.
    Warm blankets, hot coffee
    This a voice keeps telling me.
    Not paying attention,
    I keep going
    With my lamp, trying to spread light
    At this dark icy night
    Somewhere, there's a woman
    With unspoken words
    Locked up inside her
    She doesn't have any shoes to wear
    Taking off mine, I give them to her
    She looks at me with her shining eyes
    In them, rest her silent cries
    I pat her on the back
    & disappear at the night so black
    Deep wounds, thorny bushes on the ground
    Utmost peace I have finally found
    With a smiling face, I enter the next city
    I have come to help humanity
    A child at the side of a grave
    For her father she craves
    Sitting beside her for some seconds
    After a while, we become friends
    Trying to ease her pain
    Being a shelter for her in the rain
    At the end, I give her a hug
    Then disappear in the fog
    Tired but happy I return
    A big lesson I have learned
    Now, I'm completely blind
    Leaving my lamp behind
    For the little girl I have met, wants to
    Have a journey around the world too.

    by Marjan Nouhnejad

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    18 years ago

    I am sorry I have not been perfect,
    During my eighteen years of life.
    I am sorry you think I am anorexic,
    And that I live life by a knife.
    I am sorry I am not the same little girl,
    That I was a short time ago.
    I am sorry that I feel so much pain inside,
    And that you have yet to see me grow.
    I am sorry you must look into these cold eyes,
    And that I have no confidence left to spare.
    I am sorry that I like being away from you,
    And that you hate the clothes I wear.
    I am sorry for keeping things from you,
    And for all my self-destruction.
    I am sorry for making you yell at me,
    And for causing you have that reaction.
    I am sorry for all the times I have sided with Dad,
    And for not feeling a bit of guilt.
    I am sorry for being the reason you damaged,
    The relationship we could have built.
    I am sorry for using your best kitchen knife,
    To slit my wrist for the first time.
    I am sorry for making time spent with me,
    Have to feel like a crime.
    I am sorry for not giving you hugs when you want them,
    And I am sorry for resenting you.
    I am sorry for not having the same beliefs,
    And for always making you argue.
    I am sorry I do not like you,
    And that I cannot forget things you have said.
    I am sorry that each and every day,
    Those words go through my head.
    I am sorry for never calling,
    And that I do not miss you at all.
    I am sorry you had to see me at my worst,
    Sorry you had to see me fall.
    I am sorry I am not the perfect daughter,
    And that I am not who you thought I would be.
    I am sorry, mother, for letting you down,
    I am so sorry for being me.

  • nobody truly knows me
    18 years ago

    broken

    your words slice through me
    sharp as a knife
    my blissful happiness is gone
    because of this strife
    each day is the same
    you break me, then put me back together
    i'll go in my room to hide
    when i come out, you act like you don't remember
    you don't see how hurt i am
    even though it's so clear
    and no matter how many times i cry
    you don't see a single tear
    you don't understand how much pain you cause me
    you'll never understand my sorrow
    you don't know how many times i pray
    that it'll be better tomorrow
    but it'll never be better
    for when i think there's finally peace
    it's all torn away
    it comes to a cease
    i end up broken
    just like before
    all the suffering i've gone through
    i'll go through once more
    i wish you'd stop this yelling
    it makes me feel like such a failure
    you don't realize what you're doing
    my life is becoming my nightmare
    my memories are haunting me
    i'm restless every night
    i cannot fall asleep
    all i can do is cry
    the next day you come up to me
    you put me together again
    then you say you're sorry
    and you think you've been forgiven
    but there's something different now
    something is not right
    for a piece of me is missing
    one that's beyond your sight
    i feel like all my true happiness is gone
    i'm in this deep depression
    but nobody will ever know this
    for i'm lying and pretending
    i'll never show how i really feel
    unless you're someone i trust
    you'll never see a single tear shed
    in public my pain turns to dust
    but no matter what i lead you to believe
    inside i am crying silently
    for i know if things keep going this way
    my nightmare will become my reality

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    Maybe
    by Tara Kay

    I've missed this one special guy,
    He's hurt me bad and made me cry.
    And I'm just waiting for that perfect day,
    When maybe I can have him back in every way.

    Maybe he'll crash through my walls again,
    Maybe he'll say that he'll be there for me,
    My whole worlds just like a chain,
    He's got me in his clutches and I can't break free.

    He said his arms would always hold me,
    He said his lips were mine alone to kiss,
    Now after all the things he told me,
    I wish it wouldn't end like this.

    He made me see how lovely life could be,
    Maybe now I think that hope has really gone,
    Here is the lonely me,
    I wish I knew if I was wrong.

    Maybe the heart that comes apart finally mends forever,
    Even if him and I are not together.

  • Tim Bradshaw
    18 years ago

    k the contest is over i will have the winners posted by Monday night. Thank you all for a great turn out and great job to you all. I have already read some great poems I know this is going to be another close contest. Just a reminder there is 5 places and each other poem will receive one review. Thank you all again for participating in my contest.

  • ShadowDancer
    18 years ago

    am waiting axiously for results

    Ruby