Anyone requesting honesty?

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I'll give you constructive criticism.

    Only ask for comments if you would like, and can handle improvement suggestions (if I can give any.) I’ll not be nasty, just honest enough to say if I don’t like something, and why.

    I'll not rate unless you want me to as I'm not a big fan of the voting system.

    Leave up to 2 titles here and please comment on a poem of mine if you could, I appreciate honesty too

    Thanks.

    UPDATE (14 March) : I'm still offering honest comments so please keep posting your titles below!!!

  • Sondos
    19 years ago

    Please tell me your views of 'Unique Yet United'. I wrote it for a compettion.
    Thanks awfully
    Sondos

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I enjoyed your poem every much Sondos, well done.

  • Minkus
    19 years ago

    I wouldn't mind getting some CC, so go ahead and read a few: particularly "Accepting," which is my newest one and doesn't have any comments on it other than by myself yet.

  • mandieD
    19 years ago

    i have a few on here so take your pick if you'd like. thanks v much.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Could you please do:
    - rage and love
    - suicide note

    I'll go do some of yours too =]
    Thanx
    - natz x0x

  • Daze
    19 years ago

    -I Broke Up With My Best Friend
    -I'm Stupid For Holding On

    thanks, i will do two of yours as well

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    Your Own Strength
    Not a Mistake to You

    Thanks a ton! I would love an honest critic and an honest vote. I want to know how to improve my writing, so thanks a bunch! I'll read some of yours too. Hugs love.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • ♥gloriaËšs~glen♥
    19 years ago

    i've only 2 poem, thanks if you could read them..

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Please r/c on "An hour ago..." and "Nature's Paintings". Both written for forum competitions... A different theme from my earlier poems you read.

    Thanks!

    J. Lau

  • yasmin
    19 years ago

    can you read and comment Joyous Day and One Moment? i really need some constuctive criticism. thanks!

  • Brigitte
    19 years ago

    Could you please read "Tale of a Forgotten Soul" It's my newest one and I really would like to know what everyone thinks of it. As always I will be glad to return the favor! Thanks in advance!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Thanks for been patient...I'm still commenting......

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Phew!!!!!

    I think I've commented honestly on every poet's work requested...now I'm ready for some more!!!!

    Silver

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Silver, thanks for all the precious comments, they were greatly appreciated.

    J. Lau

  • Katie
    19 years ago

    yes please? esp my first two

  • alwaysremeniceus
    19 years ago

    Please read and comment on my poem called So Called Happiness

    thanks
    -kelsie

  • holly
    19 years ago

    please comment on Moving on or Not and SOS
    thanks xxALLYxx

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    Please could you give constructive critiscm (Bad spelling!) On Only You and I'd Still Choose You

    Thanks loads :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • bluehun
    19 years ago

    help me decide,im in this rut in my life,and one thing i really want to know do i give up writting poems(i feel are bad).so give it to me straight.

  • Once an Angel
    19 years ago

    You could always go with one of my poems again, your words were really brillant before. Thanks.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • yasmin
    19 years ago

    thanks a bunch Silver. great comments. :) i appreciate it.

  • Hareem
    19 years ago

    Hey Silver,
    I welcome ur comments.
    Plz check out mine.
    She Chases Her Dreams

    I'd like u to rate it as well.
    Many thanks

  • Princess09
    19 years ago

    Hey silver
    please do
    crimson tears
    dreams of neverland
    ill return the favor asap!!
    please and thank you

    ~~Sweetie

  • Katie
    19 years ago

    and again....please? my two featured ones :)

  • LettersFromEnnis
    19 years ago

    May you please read "Desperation' and any other one you choose. Ill return the favor. Thanks ahead of time!

  • Lucy Loves Not
    19 years ago

    any of mine would be greatly appreciated. thanks much.

    lucy loves not

  • bianca
    19 years ago

    could you please read my newest poem "eternaly" and any other. thanks.
    Bianca