~i love u~

this is a contest about saying i love you....here are the rules

Rules:
1.) must be your own poem
2.) must be no more than 30 lines long.
3.) you can only enter once.

here are the prizes

Prizes:

1st- 10 comments and votes
2nd- 7 comments and votes
3rd- 4 comments and votes
4th- 2 comments and votes

* every one who enter this contest.. i will give them a comment*

**this contest will end at 15 poems**

*****GOOD LUCK****

Sometimes I wonder... (modified)
by J. Lau

If everything happened for a reason,
What purpose did I serve,
When I entered into your life?

Am I simply a friend?
Who you were comfortable with,
And had absolutely no feelings for?

Am I the comforter I once described?
Who was there by your side,
And comforts you when you cry?

Am I the soul mate that you need?
Who shared all your joy and sorrows,
And a true friend you can count upon?

Am I the passing cloud?
That happened to be there,
And slowly disappears when the sky clears up?

Am I the rainbow in the sky?
That brings you joy for that brief moment,
And fades away when the sun shines again?

Am I the white Christmas?
That happens only on occasion,
And fulfills a part of your life when all else fails?

Or am I the destined one?
Who will love and cherish you,
For the rest of our lives?

Sometimes I wonder...
How I got myself tangled,
In this complicated situation.

But one thing for sure that makes all that I wondered,
Not at all important,
Is that I know... I love you so.

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Havent you seen the way that I stare,
and how as you walk past i flick back my hair
Into my heart youve walked your way
without even trying your in there to stay

When i smile, you give me a wave
but what i want is that look which you gave
to that girl who you call yours
Im just a friend but i want to be so much more

You dont intend to hurt me, or even cause me pain
You dont know that i love you, but in my heart you will remain
4eva u will be my friend
I truly love you Ben

BY Alice

when time touch its destiny...

Captivating the sight of your dream...
fabrics of thought lies shattered
treasures mountain, tranquil stream
season of bless slowly weathered...

the glittering sunlight peeps from the sky....
await for your solace touch
cascading the green, green grass
shimmering splendid brought the sense of peace....

trees bow in silence...
within your abundant charm of loveliness
break away the cold spell of winter
put us in a warm consolation...

the gushes of the stream, the gold arbion of water
splashing arround us as raindrops of love....
a simple life that i always fancy
which i hope comes to eternity

but alas...
what a woeful despair
i am simply lack of flair
when this heart strangled of hapinnes
i just unfamiliar with words
althogh in fact, i love you more than world
the word of love seems hidden solemntly with the evening wind
the ordinary thing that i've never seen

stuck in a pile of sand
on just another way of saying goodnight.....
although deep in my heart
just like heaven, i want to hold u tight..

sharing such unbridle life, apart from all turbulence..
such sentimental scenery and the wild night
girl thats all i've been longing
yet i left in silence without saying anything...

sometimes i feel like a silly star
lamenting its ability to twinkle
listening to your wish , and dream, with your special style
but i just end up with smile.....

i just believe that one day
when time touch its destiny..
i could bring you inside my story
our fairy world, enchanted with affinity...

I love you
by "-"ciñdy"-"

I feel it in my spirit
and keep it in my heart
I try to say the words
but then they fall apart

I don't know how to say this
I really want to
I know that I will get it
and you will too

Don't think I don't love you
Whatever you do,
and if I don't show it
let me tell it to you

has to be less then 30 lines you guys!

Good night kiss
by Even roses have thorns

She looks at him
just lying there
slow, deep breaths
of his deep slumber
she remembers the day they met
he wore a bright blue shirt,
her favorite color,
her in a red satin gown
their eyes met
sparks flew,
he asked her to dance
she would never turn him down
gliding through the ballroom
looking into each other's eyes
everyone else vanished
it was just them two
the magic came to an end
with the coming of the night
off they went to be alone
they sat in the courtyard
and there was where they fell in love
now they must retire to their homes
but before they leave
one amazing good night kiss
stirring in his sleep
he looks at her with loving eyes
and whispers "i love you"
kissing his forehead
she whispers "i love you, too"

*yay i made it this one is 29 lines Yay*

I'm sorry
by Love*Fantastic

Whatever i did
whatever i said
i didn't mean it
wherever you go
if you let me know
I'll come i just want
to have some fun
i know it's over
but how i wish it had just start
cause being heart broken
is tearing me apart
would you believe me
if i said i love you more
now then from the start?

My Confessions
By Cuddles

There are things I haven't told you,
things you don't know about me.
So I have decided to write out my confessions.
From this overpowering burden I need to be free.

I must confess that I think of you all the time.
I dream of you when I'm sleeping.
Everything you do makes me smile.
I imagine you across the table when I'm eating.

I confess to the underlying jealousy I feel
when you say another girl is beautiful.
But I forgive you because that's what friends do.
You don't know you're being cruel.

I confess to have fallen in love with you.
If this be a sinful crime then I am guilty.
But I am most guilty of seeing the way you look at other girls
and wishing that for once you'd look that way at me.

They treat me like shit
Treat her like an angel
They go to work
And come back home
They tell her good job
They tell me do better
they said I backtalk
they said I lie
they said I'm rude
but they dont know why
I do what I do
why I insist for what I mean
they dont understand
cus they dont care for me
they dont listen
cus too afraid
to hear something right
for the first night

oh sorry that is titled parents....

by kolya

Not sure if I can post a poem I've already written - or if it has to be made for the contest - but heres one I posted up a while ago

Only You
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Only you can fix me
Heal this broken heart
Help me to recover
Piece back together what was torn apart

Only you can save me
From everlasting lies
Protect me from sadness
From selfish, cowardly suicide

Only you can hold me
And whisper in my ear
Tell me it will be ok
Bring me back from depression and fear

Only you can help me
Save my drowning soul
Turn my life around
Reset my game, change all my goals

Only you can dry my tears
But you don't know that I love you
And I just wish that you were here
Telling me you loved me too

You Deserve

I know you deserve more than I could ever give.
An answer straight from the heart. Not coated in doubt.

Happiness without there being an illusion of hope.
A smile that does not flicker like a dying candle flame.

Love without the touch of misery still clinging on.
A haze of broken conversations.
Tainted words you do not need to hear.

Touch without the boundaries of our reality.
Something I long for but do not know if I could try.

Standing at the crossroad with no clear direction.
Knowing that what you need
may not be something I can give.

In my heart, I know what it is that I really want.
It's the shadows in my mind which will not let up.

only ten!..i need 5 more!!!!! keep them coming!
~*Linz*~

~~~WHY~~~

I have often heard you ask
The reason for my pearly tears
Why in sadness must I bask
And why scars are such souvenirs
Draining droplets into my pillow
Sleepless nights, eyes all but dry
Broken I am, you perfectly know
But now you begin to ask me why
The hurt and pain that I endure
When careless words my heart does pry
A tainted heart, that once was pure
Aware you are, but you now ask why.

The answers lie not in my breath
Nor in blank words or fruitless sighs
Into mine eyes, now yours do set
And every question they shall reply
O then! The painful cause you`ll know
All sleeplessness shall make full sense
Into my heart your insight shall flow
And why my pillow does drip and drench
But if my eyes do not reveal the end
Bear witness, god! Now I must tell you
The cause is you, my dear friend
For I`m so dreadfully in love with you

**okay, this is a sad love poem...but i told her i loved her with this. i proposed once, but she said no. i got sad and depressed..."we were only friends." Proposed again this way...because she kept on asking me why i cry so much every night and why i cut myself. so i thought i'd answer.** :)

Dhaval Shah==== 2006.

Treasure

Tears stream down my cheek
I watch you fly away
To a kingdom unknown
A paradise of better days

A place of love is your stay
Emotions haunt nevermore
Sin is not a fear here
Surroundings so pure

Lies are no longer an issue
The truth is what you find
No more rage and hatred
Peace too complicated for the human mind

So comforting for me now
The memories we shared
Close to my heart they stay
Forget them I wouldn't dare

To the end of my days
I'll mourn you forever
You were my only love
My only true treasure

only three more!

Truth Be Told

There’s something in my darkest dreams
And most hated fears
That Saddens every happy day
And reflects in my tears

There’s something that I cannot share
With anyone but me
That’s dying to be told to you
But this you cannot see

There’s something deep inside my soul
That I have realised
At first I thought it beautiful
But now it is despised

There’s something that you’ll never know
About the way I feel
And that is that I love you
but hey, it’s no big deal…

: (

only 2 more!

anyone else???

Am I a fool to fall in love so fast?

Am I a fool to fall in love so fast?
To sink and drown in tempest seas of death?
Currents of passion wild, untamed, do blast
Great swells of dieing waves to sap my breath.
Now have I known you all of one full day,
And feel I now the raging flames, desire,
Desire to hold, soothe, love, without delay
Else all my body racked and scorched by fire.
But timeless Love sees neither days nor nights
But rather hearts that may or may not merge,
And casts all time away in all despite
Of life, subject of time, where we converge:
So hasty love is never false, but true,
So long as all my joy and pain's from you.

All I want
by Just Rain

You're all I want when I go to sleep
Thinking of you makes my knees go weak
I'd give anything to hold you tight
Deep in the dark of the loveliest night

When my heart beats, it beats for you
When I am scared, I run to you
You never turn me away; you always stand by me
Even when I'm sad, to you I turn, crying

You give me so much I have never deserved
My love for you is more than words
Every day since we first got to talk
I think of you from dusk till dawn

I'd give you my heart if I haven't already
I'd give you so much love for a happy ending
I'm convinced I have such feelings for you
Stronger than you ever knew

I can't help but tremble when I think of your eyes
I'm so shy when we have to say good-bye
I get so nervous when I talk to you
But when we're far apart, I want to be next to you

You're all I want, all I need
I just have to know if you'll always love me...

~~~
He knows I love him, I've always loved him since we met... but we broke up bc he thought i cheated on him and now that we talk again i like being his friend but i still want more... i still want him to love me as much as i love him... forever... thats neverending love...
~~~

pls judge soon...

You feel the same too...

Do you know how many feelings i carry in my heart,
how do i end my day and how do i start.
Missing you and longing 4 u is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many unspoken words i wanna say,
how can i say i keep on finding the ways.
Loving you and praying 4 you is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many dreams i have in my eyes,
how can i fulfill them i keep on telling the lies.
Preaching you and caring 4 you is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much pain is deep in my soul,
how do i bear them and keep trying to come out of the whole,
Searching you and urging 4 u is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much I LOVE YOU,
i wanna tell but unable to do.
Missing u, loving u, preaching u, searching u , wat else i can do,
I wish as i feel you feel the same too........

i think now the guy will surely reaize that how much i love him.........

Bharti

ok...time to judge....i will have the answers by the end of this week end....good luck to all!
~*Linz*~

yes!!! its sunday...

yeah..and i have bad news....i can't judge til' next week..i am moving!......i am moving from alaska..to oklahoma!...so sorry...but i will read them asap!
~*Linz*~