A Bit of a Challenge

Right, are you up for a challenge? If so here it is. The compettion involves you writing a poem any subject dark, life, misc etc. However, there is a condition. It must be no more than 10 lines long and I'd like it to have some kind of hidden meaning. Interpret this however you like. Here are the rules:

1) 10 lines Maximum
2) Please check your spelling(misplet poems will be disqualified)-sorry!
3) Include the title
4) No swearing etc.
5)One poem per poet
^wow that's a lot of rules!

Okay I'll be judging these myself etc. You have until 19th March(only a 6 day contest). Enjoy!

All the Best
Sondos

The Ghost

She opens her angelic eyes
Wipes away the sleep
Slowly spreads her wings
And looks up from oceans deep

Sunlight scatters rainbows
across the ocean blue
Stretching her fragile hand
The rays pass right on through

I'm not sure if this has a "hidden meaning" but it requires some thinking.

the voice of reasons..

Dip my finger into the sea..
desperate to break the wild night
cold and smooth,form a glee..... stay,linger,and die
immature torrents....crawling high,slowly..sobbing
brought the voice of.. reasons.....
from the past purple dream..
the speecless eye,killing loneliness
soundless movement,a cup of gloom
hiding peacefully,within the dark sad water...
its just not enough,to make me.. cry......

I miss you already, I

Love being with you
On every occasion. The
Very thought of your smile
Evokes my love again

Y do you have to leave
Oh please stay, forever with me
U are my life, my everything

If.. By Meaghen

If cutting myself will release my pain

Then ill never stop slicing my veins

If shooting myself will make me forget

Then id shoot myself a million times without regret

If hanging myself will take away my tears

Then ill do it holding back no fears

If drowning myself will make everything go away

Then id do it every single night and day

But none of This will ever truly take away your pain

No matter what it will always remain..

Untitled (i need help)
by Even roses have thorns

Why does the water run so deep?
it puts out the fires of life
even though you can swim
it pulls you down
please fight and win
if you need help
i will be there
i will save you
i love you, it is deep and true

*sorry i don't have a title but if you would like to give some ideas please and thank you*
p.s. this is what the poem is under if you look for it

Keep It up guys.

Great Work everyone

Still need lots of people to enter so I've decided to tell you what the prizes will be as a kind of incentive.

1st-A place in my faves. 5 good quality comments from me and a vote on all of your work

2nd-A place in my faves. 3 good quality comments from me and a vote on all of your work

3rd-2 good quality comments and vote on all of your work

Everybody else: A vote on all of your work

Not Bad eh?
All the Best
Sondos

The Prisoner No-one Cares To Save

Hands that wave forever more
Continue as they were before
Back and forth, rhythmic waves
Hands that no-one cares to save

A face, which always stays the same
People stare but have no shame
Watch the face with no surprise,
The face which never has had eyes

Why will no-one save this face sublime?
This face and hands caught, in eternal time.

Peace. [Sole]

As I sleep and close my eyes
Waiting for a brand new day to Arise

I think maybe god from above
Could send me an angel to show me some love

Since that all mortal is cleared
Maybe the immortal hasn't dissappeared

I'm overcome with a factor of fear
Speaking out for every tear

Poor innocent girl, too bad no one minds
Or cares about my broken heart always left behind

Unfortunate
by Alyson

Darkness falls on the unfortunate
All they see is black
No one cares about them
Happiness is what they lack

We as people should help them
Why should they pay?
Why must we all forget
That could be us one day

** I don't know if you would consider this in having an hidden message, but I hope that you like it **

"Misery"
[Theo]

The blanket of the dark blue sky
the stinging of a bee
Both two scared to see oneself
Beyond their misery
I feel as though a winter night
could never cool our love
God is on our side, Baby
I prayed to him above

Go back to the beginning [any suggestions]
by Latasha

I never wanted you to cry,
And grab on tight to the fading photographs.
I wish you could see my horrible lies,
Were only to protect the awful truth.
If I could go back to the beginning,
I would erase all this pain and agony I caused.
My shattered heart and my broken tears,
Are all I have left,
As I struggle to say I'm sorry.

Never-Ending.

Sometimes you don't understand it all
And reality can hit you fast
You feel alone and confused
And the impression always lasts

You feel lost in this mixed up world
And you just need to find your way
You're in this never-ending search
And the answer never stays..

--emotionless.19*

Right Contest Over!

Results coming soon...

Sondos

Wow this was a complete nightmare to judge! Seriously I know this is said a lot but these were all of an amazing standard but I have made a decision

Drum roll.....boom...dum..boom

And the winning poets are:....

1st Prize: Sole
2nd Prize: JL
3rd Prize: Bob Shank

Well Done to all of you, as promised I will be voting on all of your work. However you may have to wait till tomorrow due to my mountain of homework to get through

All the Best
Sondos

Sondos

Congrats to the winners

Sorry it posted twice

Thanks ;)

Peace. [Sole]