sad poems contest

Winners
1st place: 5 votes 5 comments

2nd place 3 votes 3 comments

3rd place 1 vote 1 comment

Why has this happened?
by Alyson

My troubles are long gone
Now I'm standing here
In this desolate world
Alone and abandoned

All around me are the ruins
Of once grand buildings
Broken and shattered
Until they no longer exist

The harsh winds blow dust
Across the face of this vast land
Leaving the fields barren
Where food no longer grows

Most rivers have run dry
Leaving behind cracked earth
That screams in the night
For help

Tears slide silently down my cheeks
As I look at what this worlds become
Its no longer grand or beautiful
But dry and unforgiving

Why has this happened?
I say its because of our sins
All the wrongs that we've done
And all the beliefs we've held against others

*This holds a message can you find it?

~The Girl~
By: Julie Harris

The girl is walking down a path
with shadows of death above
covering the light that
she never seems to see

Her life is black
along with her heart
She learns to live with the black
She seems to know nothing else

She walks down that path
with signs of death above
Happieness in her mind
is a joke so she frowns

She thinks about death
the thought of suicde is fun
Sliting her wrists
and shoting that gun

I never loved
I never saw the light
I never was happy
I am such a fright
Nobody will cry
So tonight Im going to shot this gun under my chin and say one last goodbye

These were her last words
she wrote to everyone that
has walking in and out of her life

She took that gun
her hands so still
and said a final goodbye
and went for the kill

She shot a bullet
right up her head
as that girl
falls down on the ground

Her twin finds the body
and the note that lye with
she reads the note as
she crys to herself

She says to her died sister
"Im not a twin without you
so the other should die too"

So she took a knife
and slit her wrists
till the life of the other girl
could no longer exsist

Still Daddy

She wasn't bad, always listened
Beautiful and innocent
I'll miss the loving trance of her eyes
Her howling on falling over
I didn't do it purposefully
It was just a 'a bit of fun'
My child is still a virgin in the real world
Wide eyed and curious
With nobody to guide her
Help her, stand beside her

I didn't mean it, honest
Its killing me to lose her
I'll keep in touch, that's what I'll do
Phone her up everyday, month, twice a year
The hatred swelling in her eyes isn't real
She's just a child, doesn't understand
Too young, maybe she'll forget
I'm still Daddy

She probably won't know I'm gone
Just carry on skipping in the park
Laughing when she's tickled
Shame those tickling hands won't be mine
She must know I love her
She's not stupid, gets that from me

She had to understand and be big girl
I'm a man, not allowed to cry
I'll still be there
Its her mother's fault, blame her
My love for my baby will always be there
Shameful as I look
Crushing her dreams is hard for me aswell

This is not goodbye
by Tabby

Crying by his bedside my tears flow endlessly
I held his hand so tightly never wanting to let go
Trying to not think about what is about to be
I look up at him trying to not let my sadness show

His eyes are closed his breathing is slow and heavy
I run my hands through his thick, dark, brown hair
His handsome face is so pale with the color gray
That I begin to cry even harder thinking it isn't fair

Sickness is taking my true love away from me
Draining away his energy happiness and light
But not stealing our love away from each other
That is the one thing that he was able to fight

His eyes slowly open and he turns toward me
He smiles a weak smile and touches my cheek
I feel myself breakdown and burst into sobs
trying to say don't die but I could no longer speak

he grabs my hand and pulls me to him
reaching for my face he brings me into a kiss
then he hugs me with such a weak embrace
I hug him so tight never wanting to end this

Suddenly he lets go I pull myself slowly up
He looks at me with such sadness in his eyes
"I love you sweetheart"he says to me
"I love you but there will be no goodbyes"

"I love you to" I sob into his shoulder
I lay on his chest hearing his heart as I cry
I feel his breathing slowly fade away
As i sob to myself I say "its ok this is not goodbye".....

S.O.S by Alice

Im saying that im scared
im saying someone help me
im saying i cant cope
but no one understands

i cry myself to sleep
i miss you all so bad
I want to tell somebody
but no one understands

i need a helicopter
or a rescue plane
to fly in here and save me
but no one understands

i want someone to love me
to put their arm around me
to say that it'll be okay,
but noone understands.

i dont know how to tell them
why should i try at all
its best to keep it hidden
because noone understands.

Are You Listening?

These are my words....are you listening?
Maybe you’re tired....of hearing.
Would that make it disappear....being in denial?
Kind of would make you....feel better about things.

Could I forget knowing....the things that I learned?
The secrets that I’ve kept....without meaning to.
The lies I have told so that....you can keep on pretending.
Could I forget remembering....seeing everything in my dreams?

These are my words....will you understand them?
Hold me while I explain....how much everything has hurt.
I need you to hear me screaming....instead of living in silence.
I’ve been locked in silence....for way too long.

I need to talk but....what words do I choose?
How could words....fail me for the very first time?
What did I do wrong....and could I have changed it?
Would everything have been different....are you listening?

Please do not push me away....I can not be hurt anymore.
I don’t need to feel like another....number. Another fact.
These waves of reactions are false....hope.
These are my words....are you listening?

EXPLICT!!!!! just a warning, hope its ok

Obscene
by Emma

Plain to see a face,
Obscure another ass,
Bright when she wants,
Rape to shatter glass,

Clothes are half off anyway,
Why not do it now?
Want to see the darkness?
Let me show you how,

Give someone posession,
Scream to break your voice,
Want to feel the night?
Pressure without a choice,

Find hate in those you love,
Throw it at yourself,
Want to feel emotion?
Have 'emo' on your shelf,

Grasp at something true,
More then you'll ever be,
Want to feel the bleeding?
Act blind then turn to see,

"Fuck me" is written on your lips,
"Fuck you" is on mine,
Want more then to be fingered?
Say " Everything is fine,"

Cause you can't have a guy,
Torture more lethal then to die,
"Help me I'm fucked up,"
"Kill me, Kill me, no let me cry,"

A tide is breaking inside,
Your plastic fake a shrine,
You felt something move today,
A baby, his or mine?

end on the 26th march.

SHE NEVER EXPECTED...

Can anyone tell me, why is she crying?
why is she talking about dying?
She is struggling with a pain inside,
she is trying a lot but not able to hide.

She did no mistake and no crime she committed,
but her fault is that all she expected.
Her expectations were too high,
crossing the limits and may be above the sky.

Love and happiness is all she wanted to share,
but the guy did not bother and not even cared.
She expected him to understand her a little bit,
but made a mistake and now she is going through it.

Her dreams and hopes are all broken and scattered,
all this is worst and nothing can be better.
Her emotions were used to make fun of,
he played with her and his love was a show-off.

Her feelings no more resides in her heart,
she is crying inside and dying apart.
The result can be so so unexpected,
again she never expected...

BY
Bharti

To my daddy...
by Latasha

Daddy today at school a boy asked me if I believed in god,
With a smile on my face I said, "Yes."
Just like you wanted me to daddy.
I never realized my answer would cost me my life.

The boy pulled the trigger,
Without thinking twice.
He made me drown in my sea of blood,
As I wonder how he could be so cruel.

But daddy I know I made you proud,
And I forgive this boy,
He made a mistake,
And one day daddy he will pay.

Daddy, whats happening to me?
My voice is going faint,
And I can barely see you any more.
Daddy, I'm getting to weak.

Daddy, I'm going to be with mommy in heaven.
Please tell everyone I will be OK,
And tell sister and brother I love them,
And one day we will meet again,
Just like you told me we would daddy.

**this is about a girl who died because she believed in god...*

1ST-Tabby
2ND-wings of flames
3RD-Pure heart

All poems entered were great and will be commented.

oh my god! i won the 3rd prize! it was my first time participating in such contest here. and i m so glad to achieve this. no matter i will try betterto get on to 1st. :0)

thanks a lot Sarah!

well i read all others poems too. tabby was really fabulous and wing of flames was also gud.

congrats to both of u!!!

yay i am happy that you liked it thanks a whole bunch !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanks pureheart it means alot

tabby

OMG!
SECOND?!?!?!
Thank you so much
Everyone's was so good!
Congratulations to the winners
~Emma
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Thanks for the nice comment, sorry i forget your name, lol

congrats to the winners