Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok people if you read/rate/comment any one of the following then I will read two for each one: |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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no problem, anyone else? |
lost_laureate
19 years ago
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I've done a couple of yours, please could you take a look at "Times are changing" , "Today my world caved in on me" and "Best days of our lives..." and anything else that tickles your fancy.... |
lost_laureate
19 years ago
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oooh note I read about 4...lol...it was too good... |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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ok finished with everyone but Johnathan, I'm starting now man |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok is there anyone else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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*gasp* It was you that broke my mirror? I'll get right to it, but don't you want two? two comments for one was the offer. |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok is there any one that wants comments? Anyone else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Tripp (my pants are from Tripp, a pants company) and Laura I'm finished, anyone else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok then, who else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Oi, anyone want to take a crack at it? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Good mornin' to you to Gillian, thank you I do try, I found your comments helpful and I wish to extend my gratitude. |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Gillian, I have completed all four of your poems. I would like to convey that I enjoyed reading them and I must express my thanks for your reading more than was required. I am sorry the last comment was not as detailed as the other three but I am dreadfully tired. I have added you to my favorites so I can r/r/c the other two as they are entered into the site. |
LiL K
19 years ago
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I read "A Broken Mirror" and "My Darkness"...I thought they were both extremely good. If you could read my poem "With You" that would be great. And I just renewed -i guess you could say- my membership with the site so I only have 4 or 5 poems anyway. It'd be awesome if you could comment on some of them. |
BleedingAngel
19 years ago
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Hey, I commented on one poem, excellent =0) Please comment on: |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok I have finished all fourteen poems, you are all very good poets, I feel humbled. Ok is there anyone else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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done Ms. Kaylee, is there anyone else? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Would anyone else be interested in the deal? |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Ok, roger that, I'm of to read it now. |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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edit out 2x post |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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no problem man will do |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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lol you were right it was graphic, thanks for the warning, I should have paid a little more attention to it. |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Anyone else? |
Sean Allen
19 years ago
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read commented and voted on #1, I might do more later. |
Alex Marlatt
19 years ago
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Pip, you did not list enough poems, my offer was two poems for each one you read. You may add not poems to your list if you wish. |