Zwei fur Ein (two for one)

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok people if you read/rate/comment any one of the following then I will read two for each one:
    1) "My Darkness"
    2) "A Broken Mirror"
    3) "A Love Painted Red In My Blood"
    4) "Rip My Heart Out Yet Again"

    Note1: give me the numbers of each one you read, or I will be forced to ignore the fact you read it, this way I don't do other people stuff and that way I can get to yours or the next person without interference

    Note2: GIVE ME THE TITLES YOU WANT ME TO READ

  • Jenny
    19 years ago

    Hey

    I r/r/c on (1), great poem, could you please read, 'The Race' and 'Death to all - mwahahahaha'.

    Thanks, Jenny

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    no problem, anyone else?

  • lost_laureate
    19 years ago

    I've done a couple of yours, please could you take a look at "Times are changing" , "Today my world caved in on me" and "Best days of our lives..." and anything else that tickles your fancy....

    Thanks...
    xxx

    p.s Your poems rawk....

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    read 1) a broken mirror - thought it was great
    PLease read:
    vivisection and the clock
    thak you

  • lost_laureate
    19 years ago

    oooh note I read about 4...lol...it was too good...

  • Jonathan
    19 years ago

    i've r/r/c on 1.
    could you r/r/c on "life on earth" and "the flame will burn forever"
    thanks.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    ok finished with everyone but Johnathan, I'm starting now man

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok is there anyone else?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    *gasp* It was you that broke my mirror? I'll get right to it, but don't you want two? two comments for one was the offer.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok is there any one that wants comments? Anyone else?

  • Tripp
    19 years ago

    hmmm i read all of them since im that bored...you write great poetry. definitely continue haha. can you read "The beating after School" and "No longer see the poing, in stopping myself from being dead". and any others that you feel like ;)

  • Laura Ash
    19 years ago

    I read "A Broken Mirror" and "A Love Painted Red In My Blood"
    Can you r/r/c "Within Me" "Hate to Love" "Friends like this" and "Finding my way?"

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Tripp (my pants are from Tripp, a pants company) and Laura I'm finished, anyone else?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok then, who else?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Oi, anyone want to take a crack at it?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Good mornin' to you to Gillian, thank you I do try, I found your comments helpful and I wish to extend my gratitude.

    My honour dictates that I read your poems and comment honestly anyways so your pride needs not request as such. I'm on to your poems right now.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Gillian, I have completed all four of your poems. I would like to convey that I enjoyed reading them and I must express my thanks for your reading more than was required. I am sorry the last comment was not as detailed as the other three but I am dreadfully tired. I have added you to my favorites so I can r/r/c the other two as they are entered into the site.

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    I've commented on each of your poetry, (1),(2),(3),(4) - Please comment any of my featured poems, it would be very appreciated.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • LiL K
    19 years ago

    I read "A Broken Mirror" and "My Darkness"...I thought they were both extremely good. If you could read my poem "With You" that would be great. And I just renewed -i guess you could say- my membership with the site so I only have 4 or 5 poems anyway. It'd be awesome if you could comment on some of them.

    Thanks,
    Kelly

  • BleedingAngel
    19 years ago

    Hey, I commented on one poem, excellent =0) Please comment on:

    She is alone...
    Answer me..

    Thank you so much =0)

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok I have finished all fourteen poems, you are all very good poets, I feel humbled. Ok is there anyone else?

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Hang on I will let me find yours now

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    1) "My Darkness"
    3) "A Love Painted Red In My Blood"

    I read those.

    Can you please read

    Dreamer: Be As You Are
    Learning To Kiss Life
    I Never Knew
    Portrait From An Artist

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    done Ms. Kaylee, is there anyone else?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Would anyone else be interested in the deal?

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Ok, roger that, I'm of to read it now.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    edit out 2x post

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    no problem man will do

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    lol you were right it was graphic, thanks for the warning, I should have paid a little more attention to it.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    read commented and voted on #1, I might do more later.

    for now:

    The Flight Home
    Power, Death, and the Great Lie

  • Miss Pipp
    19 years ago

    i'll read all of them and if you want to can you read beneath these angel eyes and mum i love you with all my heart
    thanks in advance
    pip xoXox

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Pip, you did not list enough poems, my offer was two poems for each one you read. You may add not poems to your list if you wish.