I read one for each you read, honest comments

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    I would like you to comment on one of these three poems and I shall read and comment and rate for them, and I may even give you bonus comments
    1-"The sets upon my Heart"
    2-"My Darkness"
    3-"A Broken Mirror"

    Note1: Please give the number of each one you read so I can get to the next person faster.

    Note2: Please list thy poems you wish read

    Note3: Please if you already commented on one ages ago don't say you did it and expect something, just read something else instead. It is only fair.

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    I commented The sun sets upon my heart (1) - Great poetry as expected! I had already commented the other two but a comment on either 'Falling' or 'The Same?' Would be appreciated - I'll leave you to decide which one :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    I read The broken Mirror (3), it was awesome.
    Please comment on "Turn back time"
    thankyou
    love Tara-Kay

  • enfant du tordu chagrin
    19 years ago

    I read 1 and 3 they were both excellent. If possible could you comment on my latest two poems. Thanks.

    Andrew

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    ok I am done, you were all very good with your words and rhyming. Ok, on another note, anyone else up?

  • glass*wall*prison
    19 years ago

    Hey your a great writer i love your work. I read all three BRoKen mirror was the best hands down.
    You write with alot of emotion and i love it great work.

    NORMAL KID
    HEY MOM
    I MISS MY CUPCAKE
    THE GIVER AND THE TAKER

    which ever ones you want....

    ~GLASS~

  • PS
    19 years ago

    i read all three. btw i love your writing style. you choose words really well.

    um can you read...femme fatale. besides that if you want read whatever. any of the ones that are newish

  • Fallen~Tears
    19 years ago

    Ok i did all three could you do:

    "A childs pain"
    "Dear dad"
    "Its time for her to see"

    thanks

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*