Broken Friendship Contest

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Ok, I haven't personally seen many of these (Though theres probably loads that I just miss!) But it's farely relevant to me at the moment - so I though, Sole . . .hold a contest!

Rules
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Must be your own work
Must be about a broken friendship
Can be old or new - it's up to you!
No profanity **You can edit the poem**
Only One poem per person
Have fun!!

Prizes
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Everyone)
A Comment on two of your poems (Of my choice)

3)
A vote on all of your poems
A comment on 5 poems of your choice

2)
A vote on all of your poems
A comment on 10 poems of your choice
A place on my favourites

1)
A vote on all of your poems
A comment on 20 Poems of your choice
A place on my favourites

If you don't have that many poems - I will keep a record of it, and hand them out as soon as you put up a new poem!

Ok, Contest ends at 15 poems - or if theres not much interest - on the 14th April - that gives everyone one week to start submitting!
Peace. [Sole]

Frienship Lost

We were alway's together never apart,
but now it feels we are a life time apart.

We were friend's since we were very young,
always played together we were as one.

Darkness fell over us, we grew apart,
but you will always be there in my heart.

You were my best friend, always there for me,
guess our friendship wasn't meant to be.

It still puts a downer on my day and causes pain,
Knowing I can't get my bestfriend back again.

But even though we are miles apart,
always know you have a place in my heart.

by Sarah

~Red Water~

Not, 15 years out of the womb,
a boy's best friend lay in his tomb.
With nothing to be done or said,
what once was blue turned a violent red.
A vacant expression on his face,
led one boy to believe this would be his friends final resting place.
The one true gift in life is time,
that boy's best friend was also mine.

~Sean Dohr~

-This poem is about a cousin of mine (14 years old), who I was in a boating accident with. It was late at night, and it was me, him, and my uncle (his father). We hit a sand barge and my cousin was thrown from the boat. He hit his head on a rock and bled to death before we got him to shore :. (

"TaKe tHe HiNt"
I blocked your number from calling my phone
I just want to have time to think, time to just be alone

Couldn't you take the hint on why I blocked it out ?
You want us to be friends again but I am still having my doubts

That I could ever trust you again
After all you did commit the ultimate sin

Saying your sorry will not change the fact
You can not change what you have done you can not take it back

Sometimes I feel that you never cared about me as your friend
Now we both are left alone and empty in the end

It's time to say good-bye to the friendship that we had
I know this is a stupid question to ask but are you even sad?

*why is it that the people that you hold closest and dearest to your heart ,always hurt you first??*

*** this happened about a year ago i was "friends" with this girls who just made me feel so worthless and pathetic and well yeah its well and truly a broken friendship now***

Hey I know it's impossible,
but I tried for perfection
cause I wanted acceptance
and you gave rejection.

I didn't hate you - I wanted to love you
and when each day did dawn - grass soaked with dew
once again I'd fake that smile
just so i could be, good enough for you.

Some call it pathetic,
Some say it's lame,
but day after day
i'll continue on in this childish game

I'll beg for you love,
and with the most forced of smiles - ill try all day long.
Till alone in my room, ill turn up the radio and cry until dawn
then one day ill realise I'll realize I got it all wrong.

I needn't have endured the put-downs and the pain
I didn't need to feel so worthless or meek
I didn't need to play your stupid little game
and let you walk all over me.

Cause I can never be all that you wanted of me!
I can't change the way I am - I can't be perfect!
The truth is your no better than me!
and a true friend would love me, JUST AS I AM

Poems are great so far - 10 more!!

Peace. [Sole]

EGO- THE BREAKING FACTOR...

So proud I used to feel,
to have such a friend like you.
But you also left my hand in between,
which shows you are like others too.

Sharing the pains and sorrows,
and lending the shoulder to cry upon.
Now I cannot even see the hand that can,
wipe my tears and saying me “Come on”.

The moments we shared cannot be forgotten,
neither by you nor by me.
Then why are these distances made,
Aparting one soul into two, I can see.

We used to hold each other’s hand,
Standing so bolder in front of all.
No one could dare to make us apart,
And no one could create a wall.

I wonder what happened to the two pals,
That was known to all as inseparable.
I thought a lot wondering the reason,
its our ego which made our friendship breakable.

I am waiting for your apology,
And you are waiting for mine.
We are eager to talk to each other,
But we are taking so much time.

A crack between the two hearts,
Now never can be mended, I suppose.
But from bottom of my heart even today,
I wish if we could again come close.

***i feel that one of the reasons behind breaking of friendships is ego. isnt it?***

Beneath Guiding Lights

Blanket of twinkling guiding lights
envelope me from the coldness.
Restore my faith in the damaged shores
that drowned my aching soul.

Revive the damaged heart that could
not beat without the touch of hope.
Pour these tears into the clouds above
then let them shatter to the floor.

Kiss the wounds from my body that
had been engraved there by another.
Suffering innocence being violated
Bacteria poison from his words.

Brush the shadows haunting my mind
then sweep the ashes of the twinge.
The tender heartstrings which continue
to throb though nothing pulls them.

Restore the image from my mirror
that might have remained smudged.
Silver vials glimmering in the closet
holding droplets of stained memories.

Discharge these chains of regret from
my world that continue to bind my spirit.
Pour these tears into the clouds above
then let them shatter to the floor.

While I continue to cry
beneath your guiding light

Come on people. just a few more!!

Peace. [Sole]

I won't make a big scene, I'll just walk on by,
I can't help how I feel, all I can do is cry.
I'm feeling so sad, I'm missing you,
It hurts me too much, you know it's true.

I need you, I can't turn and walk away,
I wonder what went wrong, sorry is all I can say.
I'm a little bit lost without you here,
I'm a little too soft and too sincere.

I don't want you to look and see my pain,
All I want is for you to be here with me again.
You were the friend I always prayed for,
The friend I truly and deeply adore.

So maybe all I should do is move on,
Accept that our friendship has gone.
I won't make a big scene, I'll just walk on by,
I can't help how I feel, all I can do is try.

Broken Friendship...
by Latasha

Tears fill my eyes,
I can't believe how I loved you so much,
I thought best friends meant something,
But soon I realized it meant nothing,
Its just something we call,
A person we are close with,
In time that all changes,
And no one cares,
That you cried yourself to sleep,
Your now just a memory in there mind,
No one to special,
Just a girl they once knew,
Maybe I had a different view of friendship,
For when I called you my best friend,
I truly did mean it,
I made mistakes,
That may have showed you other wise,
But I can't pretend you meant nothing to me,
You were more then just a friend,
But rather my sister,
Maybe not through blood,
But through my heart,
I think about you all the time,
As I look back on photographs,
I see all the good times we once shared,
But I can't see the bad,
No one takes pictures of the tears,
Just the smiles,
So I can't remember all the bad times,
But rather the good,
I wish you knew I loved you,
And I hope one day we can be best friends again,
I'm sorry for hurting you,
But you caused me tears too,
I'm ready to ignore all the pain you caused,
If you would just be there for me,
And I'd be there for you...

6 More poems!!

Peace. [Sole]

everytime...

Everytime i go through that corridor
i still remember our steps, that have left after the rain
everytime i stand besides the road,everytime i sit on that chair
i remember what we have done

even though only words are shared
laugh and tears that have been shed
many times and too many memories we have curved on our time

everytime i open that book
i remember everything
you,him,them,have filled my days in this place
accompony,protect,play,teach,share love and stufffs,
cry,laugh,and life
everything landed on my mind

don't be afraid that you will be forgoten
don't be scared that my memory of you will be broken
i promise that it won't happen

even though our footsteps have been cleared
even though the road is no more
even though our chair have been moved
even though that book have been roten

my feeling towards you won't change
although the time has lapsed
through the wind,through the rain
i will always be,the way we were... the way we used to be

thanx friend,you have brought me fly to your world
to see any gorgeous moment
to know this world,meaning of life..
to feel the love,and spend abit happines with you
i love you.. till we meet later...
in heaven...

Broken heart

I can't believe you left me behind
I can't believe you said goodbye
I can't believe I gave you my heart
I can't believe you tore us apart
I can't believe I ever loved you
I can't believe I never knew

I can't believe that you were with another girl and you said I was your world
I can't believe so many things
But I can believe what makes me...me

Just four more!!

Peace. [Sole]

:.: You Left :.:

You left because thet times got hard
You left and now I'm alone
Not so many people miss you
But my heart has turned to stone

So many times I raged on you
Because of stuff you did
But you were always my friend
You knew it was just a kid

I was there through all the guys
And my shoulder was wet when you cried
The only problem was at the end
Right when you lied

I CAN'T STAND LIARS, you knew that
Yet you did it all the same
You broke our friendship, you ruined my life
Now I know your game

Because of you I lost my boyfriend
Because of you I lost my normaily
So if you ever come back here
I beat you into reality

By Eternity

3 More Poems!!

Peace. [Sole]

...Too good To Be True...

I thought wed be forever friends
Wouldnt end with any twist in fate
Wed have our path in destiny straight
And wed keep it going no ends

Around for each other wed always be
Id be there for you, and you for me
Every struggle, together wed see
Love for each other, living it free

Friends wed be from beginning till end
Towards each other our hands would extend
Any problems, together wed mend
Thoughts and choices would always blend
All the time, as one wed spend
Together wed live through every trend
When in pain wed never pretend
Upon each other wed forever depend

But I knew it was too good to be true
We share problems very few
Of how I feel you havent a clue
And were no longer one, but two
Away from each other weve slowly drew
And all our problems gradually brew
So much has happened, no longer a crew
Together we didnt even live it through

Forever friends we no longer are
Were not so close, but very far
Upon my heart youve left a scar
Thoughts just seem to run bizarre

I thought wed be forever friends
Wouldnt end with any twist in fate
Wed keep our path in destiny straight
And wed keep it going no ends

Too good to be true.

Can we do more den 1?
xxx

A freind is someone
who helps when you're down
senses when you're going under
and won't let you drown

A friend is someone
who knows when you're in pain
and will do all they can
to make you smile again

A friend is someone
who is loyal and true
so if thats what a friend is

what the hell are you??

A year ago...
by J. Lau

A year ago...
I told you I had feelings for you,
That it's something I cannot control.
Your heart was occupied,
So you never felt any sparks.
Friends it is we agreed,
For we both treasure this new friendship,
That was clearly meant to be.

A year later...
My feelings for you never faded,
I held onto a dream... of being with you someday.
The situation is complicated,
Yet you took me pass the limit.
I finally shared my secret thoughts,
And showed you a couple of my poems.
You claim that we are impossible,
That all that happened was a mistake.
Emotions felt were only mixed confusions,
That I need to forget and erase.

A year of waiting...
A weekend of hope... and now memories.
Feelings that were once burried,
Must now disinigrate forever.
Your heart was never truly healed,
For your hopes never gave in.
Living our own wishful dream,
Crying our own painful cries.
Friends I wish not,
Cause I trully want you to be by my side.
I promised to step back our friendship,
In fear of loosing that only chance to hold onto...
A dream... from a year ago.

Friends it is we claim,
But how true will it remain?
Can a friendship be broken by love?
Can feelings and emotions truly be undone?
Only time will tell...
In the year to come.

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Well - that was harder than I thought it would be! All the poems were absolutely amazing . . and the contest was really close. However, I have to decide on a winner so heres how it goes . . .

3rd Place :-

Kaylee Rose - Beneath Guiding Lights
Yuniardi - Everytime . . .
Ruby - Untitled

Congratulations - it was really hard to choose between your poems, so I gave all of you third place!

2nd Place :-

Tara Kay - Untitled

Amazing poem - that really struck home. Well done.

1st Place :-

J.Lau - A year ago . . .

Excellent poem, really enjoyed reading it - great work!

So . .theres the winners, and I would give honourble mentions - but I really would have a hard time not mentioning everyone! Congratulations.

I'll have the comments done in a couple of days, I'm quite busy at the moment and half banned from the computer . . lol . .

Peace. [Sole]

wow,,never expext to win,thanx for choosing me,peace:)