Read only if you want honest comments

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I'm not really doing much now so if you want comments on your poems post the titles here. I mean if you want honest comments. I can't comment much on whatever AB structure is but I can on details, depth, and feelings as well as basic idea behind the poem.

    I'd like it if you could comment on some of mine in return if you wanted to.

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hello,
    all the poems i posted today or yesterday please
    i'll do the ones i havent done of yours now
    xxx
    love Tara-Kay

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I'll finish yours when I can, promise. If anybody else wants to add theirs to the list please do and you'll get your comments by tonight

  • Rose
    19 years ago

    Hi there i am new to this, so if you could post comment or rate for me it would be greatly appreciated

    Thanking You Anita

    NZ Girl

  • Rose
    19 years ago

    I have only posted bout 3 poems so far

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    hey i really need some constructive criticism on my newest poem "You're Like Suicide". Thanks!
    I'll check out some of yours!

  • Rose
    19 years ago

    Hi Bridgette

    I read our poem and hey i think its excellent, full of total being, have rated and commented for you.

    Gunna check out a few more of yours, i like your style

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Comenting now. I grade them on title, concept, emotional element, and overall with minor in struture since I'm more good at the other parts.

  • Italian Stallion
    19 years ago

    The Mirror On My Wall

    And

    In Time Truth Will Reveal (Collab)

    Thank you, Joe

  • StefQ
    19 years ago

    -Love changes all
    -A dance in the streetlights

    ThanX
    (will read some of yours too =) )

  • Allison
    19 years ago

    How has this Happened?
    The Enevitable End
    Photograph

    Can you please read these three. I would love it if you did.

  • LiL K
    19 years ago

    Hey..if you'd r/r/c "I Miss You" and "Your Love" it'd be awesome and greatly appreciated..I'll take a look @ some of your poems too.

    Thanks,
    ♥ Kelly

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Commenting now

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Sorry things came up. Sorry about delay

  • Lucy Loves Not
    19 years ago

    "recognition"

    thank you,
    lucy loves not

  • alex
    19 years ago

    HI
    ID LOVE IT IF U COULD COMMENT ON MY POEMS
    ILL COMMENT ON YURS.
    TY

  • Synh
    19 years ago

    Hi, could you comment/rate on my poems 'Unbroken' and 'Without You, Im Nothing'

    Awersome, I'll check out some of yours. Bye :)

  • PS
    19 years ago

    a couple of my ones that i added today. muchas gracias.

  • fallen angel
    19 years ago

    hey, if you're still there could you please comment on my two most recent poems, The Wolf and Loss. Thanx

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Hey sorry about the delay but I was tryng to write something yesterday for someone I talk to *His wife had their second set of twins yesterday* andmost of today I was out. So I'll start commenting to catch up.

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Sorry again but I am sick. I felt really sick before but I'm still trying to catch up despite that. I promise reviews for all who asked.

  • alex
    19 years ago

    hey can u comment on my poems,
    ill comment on yurs ty
    i hope u get better after yur ill

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    Kaylee, hey er could you read "Damnations of "Sinners"" (Sinners is supposed to have qoutations around itself)

  • Mezmeryz
    19 years ago

    hey dis is gr8! thanx!
    can you plz c:
    'too good to be true'
    'the pain within'
    and
    'boy, you don't know me'

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    Any of my featured please kaylee thank you! I will return the favour!

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    No more for now please :) will let you know when I've caught up entirely. Thank you

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I should be caught up by now, if I missed you please let me know. I still woul like it if you could return the favor only if you wanted to. So if anybody else wants their poems read, post here.