bored with time

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    so post a title or 2 below and i'll comment upon it.

    one problem though, for soem reason my computer logs me out on poems in the "love" section and somethimes (though rarely) in the "poems about life" section. so i may not be able to comment on eithe rof these.

    f you feel like commenting upon any of mine in return then i would be most gratful, esspessially upon any with few comments previously.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Any of my latest would be good =] I'll do some of yours too if you like :P

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    ok done them :)

    both very good

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Beneath Guiding Lights
    Free And Beautiful No Longer

    I'll comment on yours after I catch up on other people's :p

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    it seems that i have previously commented upon Free And Beautiful No Longer, but i have just done Beneath Guiding Lights and it is very well written

  • Fallen~Tears
    19 years ago

    Could you do "Might as well have" and "a childs pain" . .. i ll also comment on yours once i get caught up

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    think i've done "a childs pain befroe..." but i'll check

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    well im logging off now. if anyone else wants a few comments leave the titles herre and i'll do them tomorrow or on saturday.

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    Any of mine would be greatly appreciated.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Angie
    19 years ago

    Hey, if possible could you check out the following:

    Sickening Torture
    Mascara Tears
    Wounded Heart
    Appearances.

    Thanx in advance! =)

    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • PS
    19 years ago

    some of my latest if you dont mind. of course i will return the favor. muchas gracias

  • Mitch
    19 years ago

    I'm new here, so if you could do

    Lost
    Dark Thoughts

    It'd be great, Thanks :)

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    read
    - Damnations of "Sinners"

    I'd appreciate it

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    right doneall of them.

    Sole i commented upon "My Pointless Suicide Note" and "Just Simply Me . . ."

    ღ♥~*Angie*~♥ღ I have commented upon "Wounded Heart" in the past, but i did thre others

    Poonam i've done "What will tomorrow bring" and "Ode to Straws"

    for everyone else i have commented upon those which you left the titles of.

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Hey..could you do "No One to Love but Yourself". I really want some feedback on it. Thanks!

  • holly
    19 years ago

    any of my latest thanks xxALLYxx

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    ok. done yours Bridgette

    and for ♥ iNviSibLe 2 u ♥ i've done "Through the pain and the tears I DON'T LOVE YOU" and "What Could have Been. . ."

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    anyone else?

    have a little time now and loads of time tomorrow so i will be happy to read a few peoples work

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    I'm not sure if you already have, but if you haven't, My Glass Ceiling . . .would be good.

    xXx Thanks xXx

    Peace. [Sole]

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    ok done that Sole, very good peice