~I pick the titles, You write the poem!~

Can't get over you

Believe me when I say it, I'll wait forever.
The day may never come but I'll be here.
One day I can finally open up to you,
Until then I could drown in my own fears.

I fear rejection but even more so
That you'll never know how I feel,
So many emotions I kept inside,
But now life's never felt so real..

Apart of me is waiting to give up on you.
I want to free myself this pain that I choose.
The stakes are high and there's so much grief.
And I realize everything I'm about to lose.

Soon it will be too late for us.
And time we leave us behind.
And sail off into the open waters.
I guess time was never on our side.

Its true, you mean everything to me.
So I write it on paper hoping one day,
You'll finally be able to see my true feelings.
Maybe then I'll know what to say

For now I'm at a stumble for words.
I want to tell you how special you are.
But my words would only get lost.
Because your soul is so far

There are days could've last forever.
Times that I'll never forget.
I just don't understand,
Why you're so filled with regret?

What's done is done, its history,
You can never take it back.
I can't ever say you were a mistake.
You were an exception and thats a fact.

I don't want to hear a single word.
I know what you want to say...
But go ahead destroy my reality.
Set free the lie I live with each day.

So I'll give up on you, I'll give up on us.
I'll take it all, all the pain and grief.
It's not about you, its about me now,
Hopefully with closure comes relief.

--emotionless.19*

5. ~Do You Feel It Too?~

An endless summer, and endless night,
I sit outside, and this poem I wright.
I sit and think about the memories we made,
I remember you told me, you'd never let me fade.
Always remember me, you said you would,
You'd think about me forever, whenever you could.
I remember you and your shining eyes,
You were always there, never told me lies.
So now that I sit here, the wind blows trough my hair,
I am sure you remember, I am sure you still care.
The sunset is so beautiful, reminds me of your face,
So good and so warm, so cute and full of grace.
I wright this poem in the memory of you,
I feel you in the air, can you feel me too?

1. Love Me No Longer
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I'm losing the battle
That's only just begun
Before it even started,
You'd already won
So why should I lie here
Lonely, and sad
Waiting for you
To come home, drunk and mad?

I love you, it's true
I could never let go
But you need the truth
I need you to know
What doesn't destroy us
Can only make us stronger
So please say goodbye
And love me no longer . . .

Peace. [Sole]

#2

"Until My Very Last Breath"

Until my very last breath
I'll be here for you
'till my dying day
I will stay true

You could break my heart
A million times
For you,
I would commit any crime

Until my very last breath
Ill be by your side
My love for you
I shall never hide

I do not care
What anybody may say
Until my very last breath
By your side I shall stay

Until my very last breath
I will hold you up
Shower you with
My unconditional love

Until my very last breath
I will hold your hand
Until my very last breath
By your side I shall stand

~What Would I Do Without You (8)~

A relationship bound by the court,
two parents yearning to abort.
One child's postpartum deport,
a life, from the start, out of sorts.

The help of two elders, they sought,
a custody battle, never fought.
Drug addict parents, got caught,
important lessons, never taught.

A baby that was left behind,
consequences of a legal bind.
A lifestyle of a different kind,
viewpoints from a distorted mind.

A family separated by years in time,
a life with a different rhythm and rhyme.
Two people, making up for another's crime,
always living off of their last dime.

A difficult situation from the start,
a unique picture, of an unpopular art.
A family, nearly torn apart,
two grandparents, certainly, off the charts.

An unwanted boy, now full grown,
held together by seams, left un-sewn.
Approaching life with a whole different tone,
hoping, some day, to live life on his own.

~Sean Dohr~

-I would be nothing without my grandparents...

What Would I Do Without You (8)

What would I do without you?
I didn't used to think I knew
but now...
I know exactly what I'd do.

I'd love my life more than I have in years
dry my eyes, wipe away all the tears.
My smiles no longer would have to be fake
I'd laugh until my stomach ached.
I'd see the joys in the little things again
and realize how dismal my life had been.
I'd curl up on the sofa with a good book
without worrying about you giving me that look.
I'd play lazer tag with the kids all night
never fearing it would cause a big fight.
I'd make the most of every day I'm given
and love every moment of the life I'm livin'.

Dang! Sean beat me to it...guess I'll try something else.

Very touching poem Sean :)

Depression (4)

This misery has surrounded me,
I find myself struggling to breathe,
My thoughts are driving me insane -
I'm losing myself once again.

Tell me - do you feel it too?
As if this world is not for you.
Existing here only to find...
the demons lingering in our minds.

Depression robs me of all hope
my body's weak and I can't cope
Can't find a way to escape this pain -
I'm losing myself once again.

You were always there

I love you, i really do,
I can't stop thinking about you,
But what you did that day,
Left me with nothing to say,
Why did you do this i can't understand why,
You have just left me here to cry,
i am alone now, no one by my side,
You have left me here to hide,
I think about you each and everyday,
I am sorry that i couldn't stay,
But always know i will be there,
Because you were there when i was scared.

Can we enter a second if nobody else does?

#3 Tell me No Lies
~*Who Cares?*~

Tell me no lies, sing no sad songs,
Tell me the truth, say no wrongs.
No matter how it makes me feel,
Promise everything you tell me is real.

Say the truth, never tell me a lie,
Even if the truth makes me cry.
I need honesty, no fabrication,
For the sake of my life in this beautiful nation.

Never lie to me, lies only hurt me more,
You make my heart and my mind go at war.
Say the truth, with nothing but accuracy,
Send me to the light, don't lead me falsly.

Don't lie to me, be brutally honest,
Promise me your guidance, and your trust.
Tell me the truth, with complete sureness,
I promise, no matter what, I won't love you less.

The Greatest Friend

Days I felt were non-existent,
Rumours folded between lips,
My face, a whore,
As there gossip drips,

I cried no tears,
Stood my ground,
Until I felt no more,
And left homeward bound,

I found inside something deep,
A girl I thought shes the one,
And targeted her as a new,
Felt safe and came undone,

Little to my knowledge,
She repeated from ear to ear,
I would've given up,
But refused to cry a tear,

I searched until I found,
Another who I broke up to,
I've always wanted her to know,
That Suzie this is you,

Although it took a time,
It was worth every tick,
And I'm thankful for every tock,
We've built up brick by brick,

And we're stable from the knocks,
But if one were to crumble,
I know we'd help each other up,
And I know we'll never stumble,

I love you Suzie Jean,
And I never want to part,
You are my greatest friend,
This is straight from my heart.

LOve you SnOo

~Emma
Good Luck
thanks

nope :P

nope

noo! I shall enter.
________________________
You are my everything

You are my everything
You mean the world to me
I'd throw away all I have
If it would make you laugh

If you need to cry, there's a soft space on my shoulder
We always be friends, even when we're older
You console me when I need someone to talk to
You comfort me and that is why I love you

You're one of the things that mean the world to me
I hope we'll be together for eternity
I don't want to ever let you go
It'll all be washed clean when it starts to snow

When we're apart my love seems to grow
I love you more than you'll ever know
You're precious and the best to me
You're the reason I no longer scream

Beacause you're my everything...
All I'll ever need.

im scared. lol good luck every1!

Heyyy, thanks a lot for picking me for first place!!! That's GREAT!!! Everyones poems were great!!! The poems I would like commented are:

-What Sunday's Paper Read
-Postpartum Deport
-The Enabler
-Unfamiliar Reflection
-It Couldn't Be
-Where To Start
-Six Feet Under

THANKS!!!!!

Thanks a lot!

The poems I'd like commented are:

- The Yew Bow And The Tree
- Worth Less Than Your Reputation . . .
- Not Much Time (Lyrics)
- Never Saying Never

Again, thanks so much for picking my poem, I thought all the poems were awesome and I really don't deserve this but hey!

Peace. [Sole]

i dun care which 2. thanks for givin me 3rd:)

oooo wow.... sorry took so long to reply.. forgot all about this.. n didnt think id get anything anyways... but umm lets see...

Never Free
&
Beautiful Hell

THNX!!!