its rare that I request

Hey everyone! I have never requested a poem to be read before and feel kinda weird doing so.I think if someone wants to read my poem, so be it..But I have wrote basically my first love poem..not about me and I think it turned out good so I was wondering if you all could give me your feedback..not once does a comment go unheard..I always return the favor!
"Until hes taken away"
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=709180

You have bad spelling, worse grammar, and what's even worse than that is your use of words alone.

*It's rare that I request (and having done something for the first time does not count as a rare occurence, it would count as the first occurence)
*three periods in a row make up the Ellipsis, not two.
*You use the word "unheard". We are not listening to your poem online, how could you be listening to our comments online?

There are more errors that I have listed here. Even the title of your poem is incorrect! If you intend on writing poetry, not just a jumble of words with some kind of third grade meaning behind them, then I suggest you get some grammar and stop posting so much verbal crap.

my god "top sloth" all that was really uncalled for!
there is really no need to come on and criticize peoples work. poetry comes from the heart, shes not writing it to impress you and to hear ur god awful feed back!
if you dont have nothin nice to say, dont say nothin at all!!

and go ahead and say what you want to say about me or my work cuz im not here to impress you either.

Well you would say that when your grammar and spelling is equally as poor. I'm not saying that you don't know how to present your writing properly, but writing like this will certainly not get you any attention. Top Sloth, maybe you had a bad day, or maybe you are always this vicious, I'm not sure.
Back to the original poster. I will read your poem. If you feel generous, you could comment on one of mine in return. Either 'A widows comfort' or 'Beautiful sunsets'. Thank you

LIke I didn't know about the three period thing jack ass...
Are you kidding me folks? Go look how many times people put ... in their writing...damn why is it I have requested ONE time...ONE TIME on the whole two years I've been on PnQ you all point the littlest things out...

Thanks for your input and support..I'm just loveing how nice the people of this website are...yeah right

My gosh, she was just seeing if people were interested. You don't have to go all out and mark up her typos in the post itself.

I was actually trying to be nice in my post :) Sorry if it didn't come across that way. I was being honest, but not degrading like the other person.

lol I meant top sloth not you Sarah. Chels people like him are just jerks.

No no Sarah I wasn't directing towards you...BTW thanks for your comment..I appreciate honesty

I'll read it! =]

Thanks I appreciate the reads and feedback ladies! Theres always one rotten egg in the carton right?

I just commented on your one before that..I commented on the Silver Star under "Krissey"..my collab account :-) THanks for reading! its much appreciated!

wow...Top_Sloth, i really dont see why u had to be so harsh..i mean its not like ur perfect at grammar either...I've read some of your stuff and you DO have gramatical errors...so i don't know what that was all about but maybe you should lighten up....and to the poster...ill go read ur poem right now and tell u what i think of it...i'm sure it'll be wonderful:):)

*It's rare that I request (and having done something for the first time does not count as a rare occurence, it would count as the first occurence)
*three periods in a row make up the Ellipsis, not two.
*You use the word "unheard". We are not listening to your poem online, how could you be listening to our comments online?
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Top Sloth
Chelsey asked for feedback on her poem and I think you have taken your insults way to far . She didn't ask for you to critisize her post also. That was rude and uncalled for .

I have read a few of your poems Top_Sloth and I think you should take some of your own advice ....huh....

Chelsey keep writing girl, it's always a pleasure to read YOUR POETRY.

Will read you poem, and gladly.
Also, about this whole thing on typos and grammar, go make as many mistakes as you wish, Gods know I used to, still do. It's the best way to learn.
And criticism is helpful, yes, but when it is given kindly and thoughtfully, keeping the reader's feelings in mind. Some people are just here to write and learn and express their emotion, not to write like proper poets, and everyone suits SOME sort of audience of their own style.
Cheers to anyone who believes in THOUGHTFUL freedom of speech.
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