Imagine: Come Escape the Pain

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    Hey... that is my latest poem, and i wanted to know if you could comment on that and any other two, then i will do 6 of yours. Please?

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Just read and rate, "Life-Sentence"

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    Okay... i'll do that now!

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    alright...heh, thats a really good deal..but i dont want you to think i'm only rating and reading yours so you would read mine. So yes, i will go read and rate yours, and if you want, you can go read amd rate mine...and although that would be great, you really dont have to cause it would be a pleasure to read your poems anyways...so ill get to that right now:):)..Bye

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    k..i finished..and to all of you reading this thread...go read her poems..they deserve to be read:):)

  • Lost & Delirious
    19 years ago

    Already did!!!!

    I really enjoyed your poems, the dark ones are great.

    Please, read any of mine.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    thanks... as soon as i can, i will definitely comment on your poems!!!! its late now. and i have summer school tomorrow, so ill have to do it tomorrow... sorry. :-(

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    okay im starting on the comments right now!

  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    i've commented upon 2 of your pieces, they are fantasticly written

  • Laura
    19 years ago

    hey i am gona go rite now but i only have time to do 2 poems...can you jus look at my latest 2 posted? thanx.

  • Poetess Lana
    19 years ago

    OMG guys... i am SO sorry!!! i completely spaced!! i got sick... then went out of town... i PROMISE i will do the r/r/c as soon as i can!!!! i cant now because im on dial-up and its one in the morning... im so sorry!!!!

  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    I did :

    Broken Soul
    Because
    and
    Imagine:Come escape the pain

    Could you please do:

    Distorted thoughts
    My boyfriend, my best friend
    Night Terrors
    The hardest decision
    Push me
    and
    Here we are

    Thanks:)

    --Steph