Okay, sorry..

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    I did it =) it was sad -tear- but greatttttttt

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  • RetroRavey
    19 years ago

    I will comment for you, and stuff. Thankz hun,

    Ravyn

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  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    thanks hun

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  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    it was a nice poem, but so sad

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  • gemowski
    19 years ago

    WOW great piece i did it for you great work too.
    any of mine that catch your eye will do.

    thank you and keep up the good work

    gemma claire parkes

    20 in cheshire
    xoxoxox

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  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I read it but I didn't comment because I know you said you poured your heart out but I couldn't connect with the speaker. It just felt too flat and obvious so you might want to try and add details that really will make the readers cry. Maybe use the five. Sorry.

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  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Probably just Amanda'scloset if you haven't read it. I really do like the other poems by you I read.

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  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    I did it.

    --Steph

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  • enfant du tordu chagrin
    19 years ago

    Wow i just posted on your other thread. Another moving piece. Tres bien!

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  • master of shadow
    19 years ago

    i've commented. great peice

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  • holly
    19 years ago

    will go do that right now do any you want thanks xxALLYxx

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