New Poem, "Have My Chance"...2 for 1 as always.

  • Joy
    19 years ago

    =)

    I'd really like some comments. I actually tried to stick to a syllable count in this one. The words might sound weird but it's because a lot of it is a metaphor and a bit of symbolism.

    Thanks, everyone!

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  • BlueEyedMystery
    19 years ago

    =] I did it. Could you do my two newest ones?
    Thankss

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  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    i am doing yours, please do my DID I LIE and WE WERE BEST FRIENDS.
    thank you very much

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  • Joy
    19 years ago

    Okay, you guys are all commented! =)

    Anymore takers?

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  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    I read your poem ''Have My Chance'' --amazing!

    Please comment on my latest ''The Bullet'' and one of my featured. Thanks in advance--

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  • Joy
    19 years ago

    Thanks everyone!!

    All updated.

    Anyone else???

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  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    thank you for your comments, it really helped

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  • Joy
    19 years ago

    No problem. I'm no pro at this, but I just like helping people out with the knowledge I've gained from what I have learned. =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I did it =)

    Could you please do "Emotional Landslide" and "Unhealed Wounds" Thanks so much. And can you please rate too? Thanks!

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  • Joy
    19 years ago

    Yay okay. Good poems everyone!!

    Anyone else??

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  • Mousie
    19 years ago

    hehe hi ilu... just wanted to say that!

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  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Done

    could you do:

    A story of war
    and
    Distorted thoughts

    Thanks

    --Steph

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  • Joy
    19 years ago

    Yay comments.

    Hehe, anyone else??

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